IELTS MASTER | IELTS Writing Test 97

IELTS Writing Test 97

Cambridge IELTS Tests 1 to 13

Task 1: The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Some people argue higher taxes should be collected from industries causing higher industrial pollution, whereas others argue there are better ways to deal it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

Cambridge IELTS Tests 1 to 13

10 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 97”

  1. Hind says:

    Can you check my introduction for task 2, please?

    Pollution is a serious environmental concern. It results in different quantities from industries. Some individuals argue that more money should be paid by large industries for their extra toxic wastes, while others believe that the resultant pollution can be tackled through different methods rather than paying extra taxes. In my opinion, I do believe that more money should be paid for extra pollution.

  2. Hind says:

    Is this good introduction with a better ending?
    Money paid to governments helps in solving many environmental problems such as industrial pollution. Thus, many individuals suggest that factories with excess emissions should pay more taxes compared to other industries. However, others admitted that there are alternative measures that can be considered to limit excessive pollution rather than higher taxing. I support the later, and in the following section, I will discuss both arguments, along with my opinion about other solutions that can be taken to minimize pollution.

  3. Rinal kansara says:

    The bar graph reveals the population of Japan in millions from the year 1950 to the 2019 as well as it also illustrates the prediction of future population till 2055, while the table describes the population in millions and ratio of overall population over 65s. Overall, the bar graph and table highlights,although the population enhanced in past,it will reduced in future.Also,the proportion of people witnessed vertical line in past and it will continue follow it in future. With regards to population growth of Japan,it stood at 84.1million in the first year ,whereas after a decade it raised by 10.2million.Furthermore,it again swelled smoothly and reached it’s zenith at 127.8 million in 2005,before declining gradually to 125.4 in 2015.Moreover,the prediction is that,the figure will went down South and touched the bottom at 89.9million after four decades. As per the table,the population that accounted for 4.1million of the Japan’s population in 1950 and experienced a more than six fold increase to 25.7 million in 2005.The forecast shows that, the ratio will decrease from 37.2million in 2035 to 36.5 in 2055.The percentage of total population was five fold(20%) in 2005 that of 1950(4.9%).The assumption is that,proportion of population will 34% in 2035 and experience a growth of 6% in 2055.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Overall the bar graph and table highlights, here it should be highlight and next word although does not fit the sentence structure here. It will reduce not reduced you cannot use past tense with future tense. It will continue ‘to’ follow, here to is missing. It’s is wrong it’s means it is you should use its here. Again will went down, same mistake past and future tense together. In the last line population will ‘be’ 34% be is missing here.

  4. Rinal kansara says:

    It is irrefutable that pollution is proliferating at a startling pace in all over the globe.Since tremendous number of industries engenders waste, it has detrimental effect on environment.However some people advocate that government should emphasis on taking higher tax from factories,some believe that it is superior way to deal with them.But could the tax holistically work to decline pollution?Furthermore, I personally opine that,taking higher tax is the best way to alleviate environmental issue and in the following section both views will be discussed.
    To commence with,pollution is a big concern for individuals today and industries play a crucial role to escalate it by desposing waste material in river and lack.Consequently, it paves the way for death and several diseases for plenty of people,birds,animals in various part of the region who do not get pure drinking water and fish get die which are livelihood of tremdous number of people.Secondly,the smoke coming out from chimneys also engender air pollution which enhance the carbon dioxide in the fresh air.Another point worth noting is, the white marbles of the Taj Mahal of Agra were becoming yellow because of air pollution by industries and government had imposed a higher tax on factories and they have been trying to decrease air pollution due to higher tax. On the contrary,a part from factories,there are other goods who take part to increase pollution such as uses of plastic bags,unwanted use of commodities at home and scant use of bin.Whlist environment is absolutely necessary to survive,the cost of commodities will increase drastically due to more tax.Therefore,it will certainly arduous for mankind to buy goods.Another factor to consider is,the Prime Minister of India,Narendra Modi has restricted the uses of plastic bags and people have been using paper bags to reduce pollution and it has been found that after that 50% pollution has been declined.
    To recapitulate,although there are other factors which produce environmental issues, factories play an Integral role to raise pollution at day and night and the day will not far when the earth will become a boiling pot and nothing will save for our grandchildren.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Pace in all over the globe, here in should not come. Industries engender not engenders, do not use ‘s’ ‘es’ with verb with plural. Lake not lack. Spelling of tremdous is wrong. It will ‘become’ arduous for mankind. The day is not far not will far. Instead of grandchildren use the posterity means future generation, we have taught this word in our vocabulary videos. Watch those videos regularly and try to incorporate those words. Because if you use good vocabulary then it will compensate for your grammatical mistakes.

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *