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IELTS Writing Test 85

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Task 1: The table below shows the hours of leisure time spent by people in different age groups in Someland.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales of their products. What are those methods? Which is the most effective method?

Write at least 250 words.

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4 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 85”

  1. Rinal kansara says:

    The table reveals the individuals of different age group spent their quality time on several activities in different regions.
    Overall,hours of socializing with 4 or more people and group exercise witnessed from downward trend and in others age group it oscillated.
    With regards to watching TV and videos,hours in all age group teens from 70s went through many fluctuations, number of hours of people who watched TV was two fold (1200) that of people of age of 50(600). Furthermore,number of hours socializing with 4 or less people was relatively constant at 150 in first two age groups,it was doubled in 30s group.Also,in the group of 40s,50s hours remained stable exactly 250 and reduced in the following two groups. Number of hours continues declined from 350 to 25 in all age groups for socializing with 4 or more people.Teens and 70 years people performed uniformly individual exercise at 150 hours and in others age groups hours varied whereas teens exited 450hours of group exercise and interest felt down in previous age groups.Additionally,hours of cinema watched by teens and 70s,. 30s and 60s,40s and 50s plateaued respectively 100,50,25.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      It is a much better attempt. You have presented the number in a better manner in this task. Good keep it up.

  2. Shaina says:

    In order to boost the sales nowadays, business organizations incorporate various kinds of promotional activities coaxing public to buy their products. Some of the strategy are Clearance sales, free samples, advertisement and endorsements. The ensuing paragraphs will elaborate the different ideas and indicate the most effective method.
    To begin with the most common way considered to increase the sale of any product is to reduce the cost. Recently the high fashion brands hold’s stock clearance sales twice a year dropping the price up to 70 to 80%. This discount works as a spur to the customer alluring them to buy more than what they would buy on a normal day. For example, Gucci as we all know is a high-end brand and it will cost a fortune to buy its products, but, if the brand conducts a stock clearance sale, even a middle-class person would desire to buy consequently, increasing the sales of the brand. Another way to burgeon the sale is through giving away free samples, everyone loves free gifts and if the consumers like the product then they will return for more.
    Tv commercials and endorsements are also believed to leave a never-ending impact on people. Advertisement are directed in such manners that it matches with the wave length of the customers. Endorsement by celebrities is yet another excellent way to promote. Public admires the celebrities and want to be like them so when a movie star promises that exclusive product will help to lose weight, the admirer will trust them blindly. Therefore, endorsement seems to be the most effective way.
    To conclude, several different tactics are used by business firm to hike the sales like promotional activities, free gifts and commercials but the most effective among them is endorsement by a celebrity because consumer tend to connect with them and as they are regarded as an idol people will purchase the goods which is promoted by the famous personality.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘Some of the strategy are’ strategies not strategy. ‘fashion brands hold’s stock’ it should hold not hold’s. ‘Advertisement are directed’ advertisements. ‘that it matches with’ that these match with. In the second last paragraph you indicated at the last that it is the most effective way, but better approach would have been to indicate at the beginning of the paragraph. ‘several different tactics’ several and different should not used together as it is redundant. ‘consumer tend to connect’ consumer tends to not tend to. ‘as an idol people’ not idol people but only idol.

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