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IELTS Writing Test 73

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Task 1: The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Adults do less exercise these days. Some people think that showing sports events on the television such as the Olympics and international tournaments is the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Others believe there are more effective ways to do so. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Write at least 250 words.

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4 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 73”

  1. Rekha Soni says:

    The line graph reveals the number of visits to two music websites namely Pop Parade and Music Choice on several days.

    Overall, the pattern of the number of the visits to both websites ebbed and flowed within a timespan of 15 days.

    According to the graph, the figure of Pop Parade site stood at 120000s on 1st day after that, it nose dived to around 32000s on 7th day. Furthermore, a difference of almost 5000s was apparent in the number of sites on 8th day and 9th day.In addition, a rise of 55000s had been observed until two days. Subsequently, the number of visits declined to 80000s on 13th day and then it inclined and reached its zenith approximately 170000s on 15th day.

    As per the graph, on the 1st day , the number of visits was 40000s, and by 3rd day, it had experienced a rise of to 60000s. Moreover, fluctuations can be seen in the number of visits from 20000s on 4th day to 40000s on 11th day. Then, the figure of visits swelled to 120000s on 12th day and reduced roughly to 75000s on 15th day.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘the figure of Pop Parade site stood at 120000s’ not the figure of pop parade but the number of visitors to the site and do not write like 120000s it is incorrect way to write, write 120,000. ‘As per the graph, on the 1st day , the number of visits’ to which site you have mention the name of other site.

  2. Rekha Soni says:

    It is a fact that health is wealth and people should do exercise regularly. While it is believed that people can be encouraged for exercise by showing sports programmes, others advocate that there are better ways than it. But I support the latter notion and both views will be discussed in the following section.

    To commence with, gymnasium should be built in all regions of the country as well as it should be provided free of cost. As some people can not afford higher fees of gymnasium and some live in remotest areas. Secondly, recreational center should be developed such as park and garden. If walking and jogging tracks are constructed in parks, plenty of people will go for exercise in the early morning. To illustrate, in India, Baba Ramdev has started free of cost Yoga classes in several cities where tremendous number of people go and stay fit and healthy and it is a well known stress buster activity in India.

    However, a certain section of the society believes that, individuals can be attracted by live sports on television. Moreover, there are many channels such as Espn, Star sports and Ten sports which telecast plethora of sports and when people watch their favorite sportsmen on television, a sportsman spirit is engendered.In addition, some sportsmen are role models for them , people imitate their lifestyle, they desire to achieve fame across the world and indulge in sports.

    To recapitulate, although sports play and integral role in individuals’ life and people watch many sports on television, they can be motivated by providing facilities of gymnasium, park and garden in all parts of the country.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘can not’ cannot is one word not two separate words. ‘recreational center’ centers not center. ‘sports play and integral role’ and should not come here. Good attempt.

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