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IELTS Writing Test 69

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Task 1: The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: The key to solving the environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient lifestyle for the sake of future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words.

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7 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 69”

  1. ayush rai says:

    The two pie charts illustrate the manual and non manual employment sectors of male and female in year 1992 in Great Britian.
    Overall,In that period the General labourers was noted to be the least professional field for both genders. In comparison or R was the largest area for female, whereas m and P occupation segment was biggest for male .
    In year 1992, nearly equal percentage of male and female was involved in each Om and GL fields. The percentages of female working in similar profession were 27 and 1 respectively, whereas, 26% and 2% male accounted working in those sectors. Similarly 6% or boy participated working in ON-M with 3% more female.
    In contrast and R fields proved to be the most significant job area of interest to girls whereas boys are less likely got attracted, both made 31% and 6% percentage of their total numbers involvement in this profession respectively. There was huge gender gap of 21 % in C and S fields, out of hundred, 24 workers was male and 3 was female.Managerial and professional,which comprised of 29 % of ladies and 36 % of gentleman serving their duties.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      The pie charts do not illustrate the sectors these highlight the pattern in employment gender wise. ‘was noted to be the least professional field’ is grammatically wrong. Do not use short forms like C or R these are just to help students write full form Clerical or Related. Your sentence formation is full of errors in this essay. For better sentence formation please see this video on our official youtube channel on ‘How to write a Pie Chart’

  2. ayush rai says:

    thanks IELTS-PTE .

  3. Rekha Soni says:

    The pie charts reveal the ratio of employment in different job sectors in great Britain in 1992.

    Overall, the ratio of women and men in management and professional and other manual constituted the major part of men and women employees’ percentage except managerial and professional, Craft or similar, general labours and clerical or related in 1992.( Or the ratio of all job sectors constituted the major part of men and women employees’ percentage except general labourers. WHICH CONCLUSION IS CORRECT?)

    According to the pie charts, clerical or related accounted for just over three tenth of the females employees’ percentage.Also, the percentage of other manual was three fold as compared to other non- manual in women and a difference of 2% was apparent in the ratio of general labourers and craft or similar in females. Furthermore, 30% women employees had been observed in managerial and professional.

    As per the pie charts, contribution of clerical or related and other non- manual remained constant at 6% in males. Moreover, the ratio of general men labourers was insignificant and managerial and professional comprised of 36% of t men’s employment percentage. While 24% men workers can be seen in craft or similar , men employees was apparent just over a quarter in other manual work.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘except managerial and professional’ this contradicting your own statement. First one is ok. ‘had been observed in’ wrong way to write, were employed in managerial and professional sector. ‘24% men workers can be seen in craft or similar’ again were employed in craft or similar sectors.

  4. Rekha Soni says:

    There is no doubt that pollution is increasing drastically across the globe.Since people have started to live luxurious lifestyle, their activities have adverse effects on the environment. However, I advocate that people should change their habits in order to save the future generations and this view will be discussed in the following section.

    To commence with, nowdays, technology is proliferating at a startling pace across the globe therefore, there are several transportation modes which are used for comfort. Furthermore, instead of walking, cars and two wheelers are utilized for short distance.As a result, consumption of fuels engenders carbon dioxide and global warming.Thus, people should use more bicycle and solar battery vehicles in their day to day life to protect the environment.Secondly, plastic bags can be altered by paper bags. Moreover, high packaging products are sold in the market and people throw goods anywhere after using. Consequently, lands are filled with non biodegradable waste.So, goods should be recycled and bins should be used to save the environment.

    Another point to consider is, more trees can be grown . In addition,
    individuals are cutting down trees and demolishing forests for their own benefits because they make beautiful furniture and earn good money. To illustrate, in India,all schools have been celebrating the world environment day on 5th june since 2000 with great enthusiasm.Also, this way teachers impart in-depth knowledge about the environment by planting trees and plants with pupils.

    To recapitulate, although some sources of energy are non renewable, people can protect the environment by changing their lifestyle such as using limited transportation modes, avoiding uses of plastic bags and growing more trees.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘can be altered by paper bags’ not altered but replaced by paper bags, alter means to make changes in something. Overall it is a very good attempt with almost zero grammatical mistake and well framed sentences.

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