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IELTS Writing Test 58

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Task 1: The table below provide information on rental charges and salaries in three areas of London.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Write at least 150 words.




Task 2: Nowadays, a lot of movies and music are free to download online. Is it a negative development or a positive development?

Write at least 250 words.

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8 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 58”

  1. rahul badia says:

    Sir can this essay get 6.5 bands ???

    Film and music have a significant role in our lives, as they help people in releasing their tension and daily stress. It is thought by many that downloading pirated films and songs, which are available on the internet free of cost is good. Although downloading movies and music without paying saves our money, I would argue that this is unethical and may lead to unemployment and humiliation of film actors and singers.

    Firstly, one of the main reasons for having a controversial view is that all actors and film directors make movies and songs to entertain people, therefore, it is our responsibility to pay them for their efforts, as they work hard to tempt people’s attention. If the community will not pay for movies and songs, then we will not be able to see good movies in future. The actors and singers should be encouraged by paying for their services.

    Secondly, another point to consider here is that downloading free movies might result in unemployment. The reason is that making a movie requires plenty of workforces, such as make-up team, video editors, and sound mixers. When the viewers do not pay for watching movies, directors will not be able to give salaries to their staff, and as a consequence redundancy rate will increase. For example, the movie of Bollywood’s famous actor Sharrukh Khan was failed because a few public watched it at home after downloading from the internet websites. This was a discouragement for both actor and director and the movie producer had downsized the team.

    To recapitulate, though watching movies and songs, online free of charge saves people’s money, which can be spent on other items, in my view, it is a negative development as it will effect music and film industries in terms of jobs.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      You do not have a controversial view, you have one view which you should explain in the task. Controversial is something which you are not sure about. A few public is a wrong phrase. It is a good attempt. Your basic English is good and can easily score 6-6.5 bands. To make sure that you get at least 6.5 bands try to include better vocabulary which you can learn on our official youtube channel. Also watch our video on writing task 2 it will make it more clear to you how to attempt task 2.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0_23FBCnMY

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jd-sMLheyho

  2. Rekha Soni says:

    The table reveals the weekly rents per property and salaries in different parts of London.

    Overall, weekly rent per property and salaries were higher in Notting Hill and Regent’s Park, whereas weekly rent per property and salaries were lower in Fulham in London.

    According to the table, in Notting Hill, weekly rent was 375 pounds in 1 bed , an increase of 110 pounds can be seen in 2 bed and it was less than 740 ponds in 3 bed. Also, workers earned between 98,500 pounds to 194,000 pounds in 1 bed,2 bed and in 3 bed.When it comes to Regent’s Park, the weekly rent of 1 bed was 125 ponds less than 2 bed but a difference of 100 pounds was noticed in the rent of 2 bed and 3 bed.Furthermore, salaries of workers inclined from 85,500 pounds in 1 bed to 170,500 pounds in 3 bed.

    As per the table, when asked about Fulham, the weekly rent of 1 bed and 2 bed was 215 pounds and 390 pounds respectively.Moreover, a rise of 210 pounds weekly rate had been observed in 3 bed. In addition, employees got salaries less than 56,501 pounds in 1 bed and employees in 3 bed earned 55,000 pounds more money as opposed to 2 bed.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘375 pounds in 1 bed’ for one bed not in one bed. ‘workers earned between 98,500 pounds to 194,000 pounds in 1 bed’ 985000 is actually salaries needed to buy one bedroom flat or apartment in Notting Hill. ‘when asked about Fulham’ you cannot write this because this is not a survey in which people were asked questions.

  3. Rekha Soni says:

    Sir u have not checked my task2

  4. Rekha Soni says:

    I everyday submit both together then how it is possible ? Before that I got the same response when I was submitting from my own id.now again this id got blocked?

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      we told you earlier as well that we did not block your id and try to make some sense if we had blocked your id then how were you able to submit task 1 with the same id. But clearly you do not believe us. We have been helping you for so long without asking for anything in return and yet you do not believe us so please in future get your tasks checked from someone you believe.

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