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IELTS Writing Test 56

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Task 1: Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Some people believe that houses should be built in same style as other houses in the area, while others believe people should be allowed by the council to build houses in any style they like. Discuss and give your opinion.

Write at least 250 words.

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6 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 56”

  1. Rekha Soni says:

    The pie charts reveal the population of the world , consumption of several resources by people and people of all over the globe who spent money for different activities.

    Overall, people spent more money in other, while less money for food ,clothes, transportation and housing. The world population was lower in all countries except Asia and consumption of resources was less in other parts except the Usa and Europe.

    According to the pie chart, people spent two fold money in housing(12%) as compared to clothes(6%) in the world. Furthermore, a difference of 6% can be seen between food spending(24%) and transport spending(18%) in the globe. Additionally, the ratio of other expenses was two fifth in the world. Also, the world population of Europe and America was stable at 14% across the globe but the ratio of the population of Africa (10%) was twice as opposed to other parts of the world (5%). Moreover, population of Asia was noticed 57% in the world.

    As per the pie chart, consumption of resources in other part of the world was four tenth , whereas the consumption of resources in the Usa and Europe had been observed three fifth in the world.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘all countries except Asia’ Asia is not a country it is a continent. You have not used words like contributed, constituted, accounted for and so on which must be used in pie charts. Go back and watch our tutorial on Pie chart to improve your attempt because in this task your sentences are simple and repetitive.

  2. Rinal Kansara says:

    It is a fact that it is the dream of all people to have their own house where they can spend their life with family. While it is believed that the style of houses should be matched with all houses in the area, others advocate that people should decide the pattern of house during construction.But i support the latter notion and in the following section both views will be discussed.

    To commence with, people enjoy a lot when they make their dream house as per their willingness.Furthermore, workaholics people do not get free time from hectic shedule to clean houses, they are unable to clean it every day. Therefore, it is beneficial for them to select design of houses according to requirements. Secondly, new houses are well equipped to handle all electronic appliances like washdishers, microwaves and washing machines which certainly have made convenient life of people.So, people use different products according to their needs and space at their houses. To illustrate, people who live in extended family, are unable to live in apartment.As a result, they purchase new row house or bungalow where all family members can live together and feel comfortable.

    However, a certain section of the society believes that, individuals should live in the houses which have similar pattern and size because it engenders the sence of equality and unity among the people. Moreover, it will definitely reduce the gap between affluent and poor people as well as it will look pretty.

    To recapitulate, although similar houses cause the feeling of similarly among people, people should be given authority to build houses as it is the only place where individuals spend entire life ,all people have different needs and situations in life.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘ certainly have made convenient life of people.’ have made people’s lives more convenient. ‘feeling of similarly’ feeling of similarity.

  3. neetu says:

    Nowadays most of the people prefer to build own house rather than the rented home. To build the new home, the layout decided by the person or council, People have split opinion regarding this. `The following paragraphs will discuss the different aspects of the statements.

    Although, the Own home is the dream of every person and they spend the most significant amount of money whatever earned in their life to make a home. So people want to decorate and design their houses according to their desire. Firstly, the Style of houses depends on family members. For instance, In my childhood friend’s family, they live with their uncles so they need a big house rather than an apartment. Secondly, Machines are an important part of life to minimize the man’s work so their also space are needed like washing machines to wash the clothes, microwaves for cooking, watch the television for entertainment. So it is better to select a house layout according to their requirements.

    On the other hand, if the houses built by the council in the same style it shows equality and looks beautiful. Also, it reduces the gap between poor and rich people. In some Europian countries like Denmark, Sweden, houses are built in the same pattern.

    To conclude, houses are built in the same style by the council in the area looks pretty and shows equality but for the convenience of people, there is a need the council allowed to build houses in any style according to the comfort of people and their desire.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘the layout decided by the person or council’ the layout is either decided by the person or the council. Your introduction is improper since you did not mention your which side you are on. ‘of every person and they’ it is grammatically incorrect because first you mentioned person which is singular and then you used the word they which is plural hence a mismatch. ‘they need a big house’ they needed because example is from past. ‘if the houses built by’ if houses are built by council. ‘there is a need the council allowed to’ allows not allowed. Your task completion is incomplete since in entire essay you did not give your opinion you simply discussed both views.

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