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IELTS Writing Test 33

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Task 1: The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in millions) of telephone calls in Finland, divided into three categories, from 1995 – 2004.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?

Write at least 250 words.

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6 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 33”

  1. Rinal Kansara says:

    The graph reveals the call duration of Finland’s people of three categories within a time span of ten years.

    Overall,the figure of national and international landline call and mobile call up surged over the period of a decade.

    According to the bar graph,people talked to local people for 12000 minutes on landline in 1995.After two years, local landline call duration increased smoothly nearly to 13800 minutes. Moreover, the figure of local landline minutes swelled and reached its zenith approximately 17000 minutes in 2001 before declining to 12000 minutes in 2004.

    As per the graph,the pattern of national and international landline call duration stood at 6000 minutes in 1995 and it gradually soared to 8000 minutes after 4 years.But, it hit the high point close to 10200 minutes in 2004.Furthermore, individuals used cellphone for 10 minutes in 1995.Then, the call duration raised slowly almost to 3000 minutes in 2000.Afterwards,the figure of mobile call minutes swiftly rose until 4 years and it was noticed around to 9800 minutes in 2004.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Very good attempt. ‘Then, the call duration raised slowly almost to 3000 minutes in 2000’ a rise from 10 to 3000 cannot be termed as slow. Also in overall you should have captured the trend for all three categories and not just two. Try to write an overall of at least two sentences and not just one because it looks short and abrupt.

  2. Rinal Kansara says:

    There is no doubt that youth crime rate is increasing at startling pace across the globe.Since youngsters do not afford some sort of things , they have started burglary to fulfil their dreams.However parents play vital role in children’s life , i advocate that theft can not be alleviated by educating parents and in the following section this argument will be discussed.

    To commence with,when individuals watch some sort of commodities of their peers and in advertisements, they desire to purchase the same things but, they are unable to buy it as scarcity of money and they commit crime.Therefore, it can be mitigated by providing job opportunities and making them educated.Secondly, government should emphasis on giving harsh punishment to offenders and thieves should be penalized.As a result, before doing crime they will think two or three times and get afraid from punishment.To illustrate, according to the famous television show crime patrol , every year 70% of youth who live in Mumbai, do crime because they have become unemployed as well as they get harsh punishment by bombay police.

    Another point to consider is,parents are responsible for bringing their children in this world , all parents teach offspring etiquette,social and moral values and no one thinks that their child becomes an offender.So, it is worthless to teach parenting skills to parents owing to that they always think to grow up their offsprings in good environment.

    To recapitulate,although parents try to teach everything their children since childhood, there are several factors which attract youngsters towards burglary such as sacant education, unemployment and lack of money.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘youngsters do not afford’ cannot afford. ‘but, they are unable’ there should not be comma after but. ‘should emphasis on giving’ emphasize, emphasis is a noun and emphasize is the verb. In second paragraph you are contradicting yourself. First you say that government should give harsh punishment and then in example you say that youth commit crime because of unemployment and harsh punishment. sacant? you mean scant.

  3. Rinal Kansara says:

    Sir u r telling to write about all given items in all charts?sir I always face difficulty in writing me sir

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      There were only three segments which you could have covered easily in overall. If there are more like 4 or more then you can drop some parameters in your overall.

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