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IELTS Writing Test 27

Task 1: The diagram shows proposed changes to Foster Road.

Write a 150-word report describing the proposed changes for a local committee.




Task 2: Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.


7 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 27”

  1. Haruun says:

    There is a view that people are becoming more and more interactive as a result of technological advancement, whereas some believe it is rather the opposite way. I completely side with the former and this essay will discuss both views in detail.

    First and foremost, I will articulate my point of view and one biggest gain about modern technology is how people have become more sociable these days. To elaborate further, the world is now known as a global village, which means that one can sit at the comfort of his/her home and interacts with anybody across the universe through the internet. For instance, social media sites like Facebook, WhatsApp, Instagram, Telegram just to mention few are now a hub of socialization, where people make friends, share goodwill messages, birthday wishes and other information with anybody across the earth whether they have met or not met before.

    Turning to the other side of the argument, people used to visit their dear ones frequently especially during weekend and holidays, however recently this phenomenon has reduced since the advent of more computers, mobile phones and accessibility of internet in almost everywhere, which most people prefer using the social media for interaction than to meet in persons, hence those in support of this opinion think that advances in technology is having a negative impact on socialization, but I believe that it rather save time and energy.

    In conclusion, my view is that people are now making more friends and knowing each other, not just in their communities but rather in all parts of the world, hence modern technology is making socialization more popular.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Rather than writing biggest gain use biggest upside or upshot of technology. Not at the comfort of home but in the comfort of home. Interact not interacts because in the earlier part of the sentence you have used can. Universe is the wrong word across the globe. Just to mention ‘a’ few. Internet ‘in’ almost here ‘in’ would not come. Meet in person not persons. Advances in technology are having a not is having a because advances in plural.

  2. Haruun says:

    Thanks for feedback

  3. Rinal Kansara says:

    There is no doubt that technology is proliferating at startling pace across the globe.Since technology has become a corner stone of the modern era,people have changed the way of communication.While some people advocate that technology helps people to interact with friends and relatives, others believe that people are not more sociable than past.But I support the former notion and in the following section both views will be discussed.

    To commence with,technology plays vital role in individuals life as people easily communicate with their kith and kin at any time within few seconds.Moreover,there are many applications such as facebook, whatsapp and imo which are useful to get in touch with their love one regard less of distance.Secondly,with the advent of transportation such as metro train,bullet train and airplane,now a days,we can breakfast in Japan,lunch in Singapore and dine at Delhi.Also, it reduces the journey time therefore people can manage their other activities.To illustrates,there are many online shopping applications such as Amazon and Facebook which people use for online shopping.As a result, people save their transportation cost and journey time.

    On the other hand,it has detrimental effects because face to face communication has disappeared (here disappeared is correct word?). Furthermore,children spend more time on internet in playing video games and watching movies rather than playing sports or doing outdoor activities. Consequently,they do not spend their quality time with their parents and peers.

    To recapitulate,although people spend more time in using electronic gadgets rather than doing other activities, they can immediately reach at their destination and connect online with anyone.Also, due to technology our big planet the earth has shrunk and it became a global village.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      same mistake individual’s life or individuals’ life if you are referring to more than one person. ‘their love one’ their loved ones. regardless is one one and cornerstone too. ‘To illustrates’ illustrate not illustrates. ‘To illustrates,there are many online shopping applications such as Amazon and Facebook which people use for online shopping.As a result, people save their transportation cost and journey time.’ how is this point relevant to people being more social? Not disappeared but has declined, disappeared means extinct which is clearly not the case people still meet with each other. .internet in playing video’ in should not come here. ‘earth has shrunk’ wrong usage shrunk means something becoming small physically but the size of earth is same. ‘it became a’ it has become a global village.

  4. Rinal Kansara says:

    There is no doubt that technology is proliferating at startling pace across the globe.Since technology has become a corner stone of the modern era,people have changed the way of communication.While some people advocate that technology helps people to interact with friends and relatives, others believe that people are not more sociable than past.But I support the former notion and in the following section both views will be discussed.

    To commence with,technology plays vital role in individuals life as people easily communicate with their kith and kin at any time within few seconds.Moreover,there are many applications such as facebook, whatsapp and imo which are useful to get in touch with their love ones’ regard less of distance.Secondly,with the advent of transportation such as metro train,bullet train and airplane,now a days,we can breakfast in Japan,lunch in Singapore and dine at Delhi.Also, it reduces the journey time therefore people can manage their other activities.To illustrates,there are many online shopping applications such as Amazon and Facebook which people use for online shopping.As a result, people save their transportation cost and journey time.

    On the other hand,it has detrimental effects because face to face communication has disappeared (here disappeared is correct word?). Furthermore,children spend more time on internet in playing video games and watching movies rather than playing sports or doing outdoor activities. Consequently,they do not spend their quality time with their parents and peers.

    To recapitulate,although people spend more time in using electronic gadgets rather than doing other activities, they can immediately reach at their destination and connect online with anyone.Also, due to technology our big planet the earth has shrunk and it became a global village.

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