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IELTS Writing Test 24

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Task 1: The graph below shows waste recycling rates in the U.S. from 1960 to 2011.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Some people say the Olympic Games are not relevant in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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8 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 24”

  1. Rinal Kansara says:

    The line graph reveals the national recycling rates in the U.S with in a time span of 51 years.

    Overall,intially the pattern of recycling started from higher percentage but at the end of the period, the figure of total waste recovery surpassed the pattern of recycling.

    According to the graph,total waste recovery was 5.6 million tons in the year of 1960 but it increased smoothly 16.7 million tons after 25 years. Moreover,the figure of total recovery waste had swelled 69.5 million tons in 2000 then it again leaped and reached its zenith 86.0 million tons in the year of 2011.

    As per the graph,the figure of recycling stood at 6.4% in 1960. Afterwards,it slightly increased 10.1% in 1985. Furthermore,there was 16.0% recycling after 5 years.Again,the ratio of recycling soared gradually 28.5% in 1990 and the pattern of recycling hit the high point 34.7% in 2011.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Again in overall you have compared two entirely different things, one is in percentage and other is in absolute units. You keep repeating this mistake in spite of being highlighted so many times before. ‘increased 10.1% in 1985’ increased to 10.1% another mistake which we have pointed out earlier but we do not see the improvement.

  2. Rinal Kansara says:

    It is a fact that sports play an integral role in individuals’ life.Since olympics broaden the horizon of youngsters, many countries organise olympics in their region.While some people advocate that,sports is absolutely necessary to stay fit and healthy,some deny this issue.But i holistically support the former notion and in the following section both views will be discussed.

    To commence with,olympics are beneficial as youngsters come to know sportsmen of other countries and they gain self confidence after playing among international players.Also,it is held after four years between many countries therefore the country of the winner team become famous across the globe and people feel proud to being a citizen of their country.Secondly,it straightens the relationship between countries because people of another country visit the host country to encourage sportsmen of their own country. Moreover,when fans of olympics travel to the host country,they spend their money in accommodation,food and travelling.As a result,plenty of people of the host country get job opportunity and it improves the living standard of people of the host country.To illustrates, England is the host country which held the world cup cricket match of 2019 and now a days plenty of indian have been going to England to enjoy world cup cricket match. Thus, Indian get good chance to communicate with people of England,know their culture,customs and tradition.

    Another point to consider is,the country get developed because sports enhance their economy and government can the huge monetary value in other rudimentary facilities such as education,trasportation and healthcare which are fruitful for local people.

    To recapitulate,If people participate in olympics with great enthusiasm,the host country and people both definitely get profit.Owing to that sports brings many skills for participants and participants brings people of their country in different region.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘While some people advocate that,sports is absolutely necessary to stay fit and healthy,some deny this issue’ please read carefully is this the essay statement you have completely changed and misinterpreted the question statement. straightens, you mean strengthens. ‘To illustrates’ illustrate. ‘government can the huge monetary value’ grammatically incorrect. ‘sports brings’ bring. ‘participants and participants’?

  3. RINAL KANSARA says:

    sir here u told me to write increased’ to’ 10% and in task 22 u told me nearly’ to ‘and
    almost “to”.but to be honest i do not understand where i should use “TO”.always in all task increased “to” decreased “TO” swelled “TO”?So in this task 1 last para 5th line, the ratio soared gradually to 28.5%??????or do not use here “to”?let me know sir.i get confused.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Always write to between comparison verbs like increased, decreased, inclined and swelled, and numbers. For example increased to 100, decreased to 50.

  4. Rinal Kansara says:

    The table reveals the number of offspring born to women of age between 40 to 44 years in Australia in four years.

    Overall,the percentage of women who had two children was highest in four years.

    According to the table,the ratio of women having two children was more as compared to three offspring in 2006. Moreover,15.9% women did not have child and the percentage of mother of one child and parent of four or more children was almost similar in the year of 2006.Furthermore,there was similarity in the ratio of Australian females having no child,one child and four or more children in 1996.But percentage raised and it was maximum of mother of two offspring and three offspring.

    As per the graph,in 1986,the ratio of females who gave birth to four or more children was almost twice that of women had no child and one child.In addition,there was a difference of 8.6% between Australian mother of two offspring and three offspring during the year of 1986.Majority of women gave birth to two children,three children and four or more children in 1981 but the ratio reduced for Australian females having no child,one child and two children.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Always use the with highest. ‘compared to three offspring’ as compared to women with three children. ‘But percentage raised and it was maximum of mother of two offspring and three offspring’ maximum cannot be for the both the categories, it can be assigned to only category that is what maximum means. It is better to write in chronological order which means follow the timeline. Start with the earliest year that is 1981 and then move up to 2006.

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