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IELTS Writing Test 1

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Task 1: The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons wherever relevant.

write at least 150 words.




Task 2: Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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203 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 1”

  1. Ngolofwana Marie says:

    The two maps illustrate how as city hospital was accessed in 2007 and 2010.
    Overall, the city saw tremendous transformation over the 3 year period. In 2007 ,there was poor road networtk to the hospital as there was only one bus stop that had to connection by road to the facility. Moreover, the hospital only had one car park for everyone to use.
    While in 2010, more infrastructure was added to the and improved even though other features remained untouched.
    The city bust stop was initially located to the Eastern part of the hospital in 3007 as nd was slightly far. This was then demolition demolished and recontructed inside the hospital premises with two roads built connecting from it, one on the northern dude leading to the nearby constructed hospital round about and another on the southern code leading off to the second found about which connected to the city road. Between the two round abouts, the hospital road was maintained, however, to the Eastern side of it, s car part for staff was constructed. To the northern side of this was an exit leading off to the public car park as you turn left. The hospital remained in the not nothern part of the city.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      Sir your answer is good but it still needs a lot of improvement. Some grammatical errors such as ‘one bus stop that had to connection by road’ here ‘to’ is wrongly used. Another mistake ‘more infrastructure was added to the and’ here ‘the’ is wrongly used. ‘The city bus stop was initially located to the Eastern part’ here you should write ‘on the eastern part’ and not ‘to the’. ‘Demolition demolished’ cannot be used together. ‘on the norther dude’ why have you used ‘dude’ here?

      And many more such mistakes. Right now your style will get you maximum 6 bands in writing. If you want more then please work on your grammar and vocabulary.

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      • sadaf Walliyani says:

        The given maps depict, accessing road to a city hospital during four year from (2007 to 2010).
        Overall, the maps indicate changes taken place in the infrastructure of transport such as bus station, new roundabouts and new parking of City hospital. In 2007 there were no facility of bus station and roundabout while, the car parking was available for both staff and public.
        According to the first map, in 2007 the staff car parking is next to the hospital road while, in map two it is divided into two portions in 2010 such as, car parking for public in the east of city hospital beside ring road and car parking for staff between city and hospital road. In contrary, the bus station located in the west of hospital road in both maps is constructed in a new model in 2010.
        On the other hand, in 2010 the hospital has constructed two roundabouts for entering in the hospital one is next to city road another is in front of hospital road.

        • IELTS MASTER says:

          ‘accessing road to a city hospital’ access road not accessing road and do not write years in bracket. ‘In 2007 there were’ it should start with a new paragraph and instead of were, was should come. ‘car parking is next’ was not is because the map is of past 2007. ‘in map two’ do not write like this mention the year 2010 and write that in 2010 it was changed or separated for staff and public. ‘2010 the hospital has constructed’ first mistake it should be had not has and second mistake hospital did not construct anything.

  2. Marie Ngolofwana says:

    Thanks for the reply, I just realized that didn’t pproof read my essay that is why it has so many grammatical errors. For example line 6 is supposed to read , had no connection,, that be dude be and code are both sides. May I edit it and resend. Otherwise than a million.

  3. Marie Ngolofwana says:

    The two maps illustrate how a city hospital was accessed in 2007 and 2010.
    Overall, the city saw tremendous transformation over the 3 year period. In 2007 ,there was poor road networtk to the hospital as there was only one bus stop that had no connection by road to the facility. Moreover, the hospital only had one car park for everyone to use.
    While in 2010, more infrastructure was added to the city and improved even though other features remained untouched.
    The city bus stop was initially located to the Eastern part of the hospital in 2007 and was slightly far. This was then demolished and recontructed inside the hospital premises with two roads built connecting from it, one on the northern side leading to the nearby constructed hospital round about and another on the southern side leading off to the second round about which connected to the city road. Between the two round abouts, the hospital road was maintained, however, to the Eastern side of it, car part for staff was constructed. To the northern side of this was an exit leading off to the public car park as you turn left. The hospital remained in the nothern part of the city.

  4. Likando Sililo says:

    The two maps illustrate the road way to town hospital in the year 2007 and 2010.

    Overall, the town hospital saw tremendous and modern changes from 2007 to 2010.

    In 2007, to the south of the city hospital was a city road which was giving way to the hospital road, this was in between the six bus stops which were on the west and east side of the hospital road. And just besides the three bus stops that are on the east side of the Hospital road was the car park for the public and the staff.

    In the year 2010, the town hospital was located in the direction as that one in 2007. The city hospital was connected to two roundabouts, the first was further south to the ring road and the second was just close to the city hospital. From city road was a roundabout connecting to the hospital road , which was also demarcated by the bus station on the west side of the hospital road and staff car park which was on the east south of the city road. The public car park was situated on the east side of the hospital in 2010, which was independent from the staff car park in 2007.

  5. Vaibhav sharma says:

    Hii sir

  6. rush says:

    The two maps represent the pathway connection to a city hospital between 2007 and 2010.
    Overall the bus station and car parking area had been separated from each other during the three years.Furthermore ,roads had been structured totally in a new way.
    In 2007 the car parking for staff membars and common people was in the same spot,situated in the south east side.But in 2010 the car parking area for public had been relocated across the city hospital in the north east side.
    The hospital road ,whose north end is connected with ring road and south end is connected with city road,had been developed over the three years.in 2010.At the both cross-connection,there had been installed a roundabout.All of bus stationhad separated from car parking area in 2010 and relocated at the south-west side across the stuff car parking spot.also this station area had build two gateway connected with both roundabout.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      Please write the entire essay in past tense and do not use ‘is’. Also avoid grammatical errors like in the last line you have written ‘had build’ please know that with had we always use third form therefore right phrase is ‘had built’. Otherwise your structure is ok. And try to inculcate good vocabulary.

  7. betty says:

    The maps illustrates a road access to a City Hospital in the Year 2007 and 2010.
    Overall, the map elucidates the changes that were carried out in the City Hospital between 2007 and 2010.
    Firstly, according to the map shown, there were three bus stops each,located at the west and East end of the hospital respectively.
    In 2007, it was only a road that led to the entire hospital with only one car park for the entire staffs and public which would have led to a major road congestion and delays.
    Meanwhile, in 2010,there was a marked development with renovations and enlargements with a new public car park located on the East side of the Hospital also two roundabouts replaced the old hospital road while a bus station was located on the Western South end of the Hospital.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      Never use words like firstly in task 1. Meanwhile is not proper word here because you are talking about particular year 2010, meanwhile means during that is between 2007 and 2010.

  8. Amydeck says:

    The two maps represents accessibility to a city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010 respectively.
    Overall, in the year 2007, driving through the city road, you’ll pass through a four point road to the right to reach the hospital road, whereas, in the year 2010, from the same city road, you’ll have to bypass a roundabout to your right to get to the hospital road.
    Firstly, in 2007 both staff and public shared the same parking space at the car park on the right flank of the hospital road, in contrast in the year 2010, a parking lot was built for public at the east wing of the city hospital while the staff maintained the car park on the right side of the hospital.
    Also, in 2010, a bus station was formed on the left side of the hospital road which was merely a bus stop in 2007.
    Further more, there are 2 roundabout erected in 2010 from city road to city hospital unlike a four point road that connects city road to city hospital.
    Finally, in 2007 and 2010 there was no change in the Ring road at the northern part of the city hospital.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      Grammatical error in the first sentence ‘two maps represents’ maps is plural hence represent and not represents. Do not use short form you’ll. Make mistake in the essay you have used present tense while the data is of past. Further more is one word furthermore.

  9. Jamie ^_^ says:

    The two maps given show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010.
    In 2007, bus stops were located along Hospital Road, while bus stops were moved to a newly built bus station in 2010, which is on the west of Hospital Road. This can reduce traffic congestion occurring at Hospital Road due to buses stopping for passengers to get on and off buses.
    The car park near the city hospital used to provide parking service for both the staff of the hospital and the public in 2007. In 2010, a new car park was built near Ring Road for the public’s use, while the original car park, which was on the east of Hospital Road, was provided as staff car park. This can increase the number of parking spaces available and avoid crowding situation in the parking lot during peak hours or weekends.
    In addition, two roundabouts were built in 2010. One roundabout was located at the intersection of Hospital Road and City Road, while the other roundabout was located at the intersection of Ring Road and Hospital Road. Both roundabouts were linked to the bus station, in other words — buses can access to the bus station using the roundabouts instead of Hospital Road. This allows more spaces for smaller vehicles to use Hospital Road, and reduces traffic jams and air pollutions in the main road.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      Excellent attempt. Good job Sir. Just one small mistake in line ‘buses can access to the bus station’ here write ‘buses can get access to the bus station’. Otherwise brilliantly written. Keep it up and you will get your desired bands for sure. And thanks for availing our services. And also try to put some good words to embellish your task that will really help you. For vocabulary you can subscribe our youtube channel where we frequently upload videos on all modules and vocabulary separately.

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  10. Shankar says:

    Task 2:

    It is argued that people who live in different speaking language country faces many social and practical problems. This essay agress that people do faces challenges while speaking foreign language. Firstly, This essay will discuss on social issues faced by the poeple and secondly, discuss how this impact the daily life.

    people moved to different countries often been seen staying alone and having limilted friends circle due to the communication gap. Generally, many people fear that their words could be interpret wrongly and they prefer to stay quiet. According to recent article published in New York times, 30 percent people staying America have hardly 1-2 friends.

    On other hands, Various health issues like depression are also been found in people due to loneliness and this might also lead to the money issues as medical services are expenses. For example, people staying with family seen more happy then single peoples.

    In conclusion, People who moves to differnet speaking language country faces various health and social issues and they should make more friends to speak with and should learn the local cultures.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      First major mistake word count is way below the threshold of 250 words. No matter how good your english is if you do not meet word count criteria you will never score good in writing. I can see a lot of grammatical errors for example you have written faces with people but people is plural so face is the right word. Spelling mistake agress. Never use firstly and secondly in introduction. On the other hand not hands. Medical services are expensive not expenses. Single peoples wrong word never write peoples it is always people. Again moves with people same mistake. You need to work on basic grammar and try to meet word limit. Also vocabulary is very simple. If you want high bands then you need to use advanced vocabulary which you can learn from our youtube channel where post videos on advanced IELTS vocabulary. One such video is this https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=700OYTGaiNE

  11. Aivy L says:

    The maps illustrated compare the changes in the access from City Road to the city hospital in two years 2007 and 2010.

    At first glance, it is noted that two roundabouts were constructed in 2010, one of them at the junction of Hospital Road with the hospital up north, while the second one down south at the other end of the road’s junction with City Road.
    These two roundabouts were connected together by a bus station to the west, allowing the hospital to have more than one access point. Whilst in 2007, only Hospital Road led to the hospital with bus stops situated at both sides of the road.

    In 2007, there was only one car park used simultaneously by the hospital staff and the public. Whereas, in 2010, this parking space was reserved for staff members only, as another car park was built for the public on the east side of Ring Road which surrounds the hospital.

    Overall, the recent utilization of the hospital’s surrounding spacr rendered thr hospital more reachable and allowed for more parking areas to avoid overcrowding.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      ‘The maps illustrated compare’ is grammatically wrong instead write ‘The maps illustrate the changes’. ‘it is noted’ write ‘it can be discerned’. Couple of spelling mistakes ‘spacr’, ‘thr’. Rest is fine.

  12. Aivy L says:

    Immigration, while becoming extremely popular, it comes with a set of problems. One of them is the need to speak in a different tongue other than the person’s native tongue. While speaking in a foreign language can sometimes lead to some social and practical issues, it is not always the case.
    Learning a new language is relatively easy at a young age, but it can be quite challenging for older generations. For immigrants who travel to a different country in their late years, they sometimes feel that it is too late for them to learn the country’s language. Consequently, they close up on themselves, living a life of introversion, missing out on life which may lead to grave mental problems, for instance, depression.
    Moreover, lacking the ability to speak the country’s language can sometimes be very significant that it can create miscommunication which at times can prove fatal. For example, in case of emergency any delay in seeking medical attention or the lack of appropriate communication between the medical staff and a patient can have serious consequences. I have personally witnessed a similar situation where a post-operative patient’s health was deteriorating and she was not able to express herself as she did not speak the language although she lived in the country for 20 years. Thankfully, the situation got controlled by the presence of a translator by chance.
    Nevertheless, while one will struggle a bit in the beginning of his life in a foreign country, it will prove worthwhile as it is the perfect opportunity to learn the language first hand from native speakers. It will be difficult at first but if the person sets his mind on it, he will gain so much giving himself the opportunity to explore a new culture with all its aspects.
    To conclude, foreigners can go through tough experiences if they do not speak the country’s language, but if they spent enough effort and commitment to apprehend the country’s language, it will prove very beneficial.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      ‘it’ in the first line redundant. Start with a better introduction. One of them is wrong them is used for person only write one of these. Do not use tongue for language instead use the word dialect. ‘Thankfully the situation got controlled by the’ instead write ‘Fortunately a potential untoward event was preempted by’. ‘in the beginning of his life in a’ write ‘in the initial stages after her migration’. For general examples use her, herself not him and himself, it is widely accepted in professional writing now. ‘apprehend’ is wrong word here correct word is ‘comprehend’.

  13. Aivy L says:

    Thank you very much for your feedback.

  14. Smiley says:

    The given map illustrated the changes to the roads surrounding a city hospital in a 3-year period, from 2007 to 2010. As can be seen from the map, it is evident that the roads in the hospital area has experienced significant alteration, with the introduction of a number of new facilities.
    A recently developed public parking lot for car emerged right to the east of the hospital, this car park is used publicly instead of the miscellaneous parking lot for both hospital staff and goers in 2007. As a result, the previous parking lot was used exclusively for the member of the hospital.
    Another major change to the area was the removal of the series of bus stops alongside the Hospital road to make way for the advent of the bus station to the south west of the city hospital. Simultaneously, two roundabouts were constructed to orient the traffic in and out of the bus station, lied at both ends of the Hospital road.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      Illustrate not illustrated. Do not write Hospital with capital H. Rest is very well written.

      • Smiley says:

        Thank you so much!
        Can you please give a score for this writing?

        • IELTS-PTE says:

          You can easily score 6-6.5 with this writing. In writing score mainly depends on task 2 because it is of 6 bands and task 1 of 3 bands so prepare well for task 2. And to score in task 2 you need to have very good vocabulary. For vocabulary you can check our tutorials on our official youtube channel youtube.com/englishwithd

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  15. Thao Hoang says:

    Dear,

    Could you please kindly help me correct and give me the general score for this task? Thank you so much!

    Two maps illustrates the growth in the traffic infrastructure near a city hospital from 2007 to 2010.

    Overall, the area witnessed a development in the road access to the hospital. After three-year period, it then could be easily reached by both cars and buses. Two roundabouts was also built in the surroundings.

    In 2007, the bus stop had been located quite far to the east of the hospital. However, in 2010, it was moved to beside Hospital Road, opposite the staff car park and just within a walking distance to the main building. The original car park, once serving both the public and the staff, was turned into the staff parking space only in 2010. Instead, public vehicles would be kept in the newly built parking lot at the east side of the hospital.

    Another noticable change taking place in the area was the introduction of roundabouts at the intersections of Hospital Road with City Road and Ring Road. Two tree rows along Hospital Road were also cut down to make the way for other constructions.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      Illustrate not illustrates because maps is plural. Two roundabouts were not was. Never use to with beside. Another noticeable (spelling mistake) change that took place not taking place. You can score maximum of 6 bands with this writing.

  16. Thao Hoang says:

    Since globalization was set in motion, the fact that people can relocate in foreign countries has become easier and more popular. I completely agree with the idea that living abroad where people have to speak another language can have both drawbacks and benefits.

    In one hand, staying in a country whose laguage is not their mother tongue can cause several social issues. From individual perspective, almost everyone experiences homesickness or culture shock while living in a foreign country. The situation even gets worse when language can be such a barrier that isolate them from the society. As a result, the chances that they suffer from mental problems such as stress or depression are higher. In addition, from society perspective, immigrants bring along with them their own cultural identity, which may get resistance or even discrimination from local residents.

    Living in a place where people have to speak a second language, on the other hand, can practically benefits them too. After some very first so-called negative impressions, if people can overcome such social problems as mentioned above, they will become more independent and mature. These tough experiences are precious life lessons that they can only get when living far away from home. Moreover, living abroad is the unique opportunity for them to be immersed in the native language and exposed to a foreign culture. This can broaden their horizons and open the door to better opportunities. For instance, one of my Vietnamese friend, who studied in the United States for five years, finally got an offer from a local company to work there and later on became an American citizen.

    To conclude, for the reasons mentioned above, I believe that staying in another country can bring about both social disadvantages and practical advantages.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      In one hand is wrong phrase to use. From individual’s perspective. Cultural shock not culture. Better phrase would be difficulty adapting the new culture. After some ? very. Instead of To conclude use To reiterate. Your basic English is ok. You need to work on vocabulary because you use very simple words in the essay. For advanced vocabulary please check our youtube tutorials at youtube.com/englishwithd

  17. prasanna says:

    could you please rate this one

    The given maps show improvements made to road network around city hospital between 2007 and 2010. In overall sense, The development seem to be convenient to both public and staff.
    In 2007, there were only a cross road and a T junction in front of the hospital. Two bus stops were there on either side of hospital road for the convenience of the people accessing by bus. There was only one car park for both public and staff which was to the right side of hospital road with entrance from ring road.
    In Contrast, a considerable change had taken place by 2010. The two junctions had been developed into roundabouts. A bus station with two connecting roads to the roundabouts had been developed, reducing the possible traffic on the Hospital Road. The previous car park had been developed with access only to staff. Furthermore, for the convenience of the public, another car park had been constructed at the right side of the Ring Road.

  18. Prasanna says:

    Nowadays for several reasons people have to travel to foreign countries too often and stay there for some time for different reasons. If the natives do not speak a language you are fluent, most of the time this would be problematic ether socially or practically. In the following sections I would be discussing how and when it will be problematic or not.
    First, if you live in a foreign country for study for few months or few years this would cause practical problems. Although For a few days you may have somebody to guide. But after sometime, you will have to venture alone. You will have to travel in public vehicles, go to shops and markets for your daily needs. Here, sometimes the natives may misunderstand you or sometimes they will refuse to sell something because you don’t understand the language. For example, once I went to a foreign training and with some other foreigners went to a restaurant and ordered something that looked like big chunk of meat. However, after thirty minutes they delivered only very small pieces of bacon and we were frustrated of seeing what was on our plates.
    If a person lives in a foreign country for several years, he or she will have to face social problems in addition to the practical problems, if he or she does not speak the native language. The natives will consider such a person as an alien and many ethnic problems in several countries have had their origin in visitors not learning the language of the host community and trying to live as a segregated community.
    But if somebody is living in a country for a short time, for example for a short training or trip , he or she may not encounter this problem as there will be not so much social interactions to be done. Moreover, there will be a guide for assisting him or her in such occasions.
    Considering above situations, I would like to agree with the given opinion that it would cause practical and social problems most of the time. However, if the time of stay is not so long this would not be a serious problem.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Need to come up with better ideas and arguments. Vocabulary is very common. You have written don’t, we have specifically mentioned in our video on writing that this is a big mistake probably you did not watch the video carefully.

  19. Ahmed Ali says:

    Speaking overseas language has always been a hurdle for many immigrants. It is often argued that communicating in a non-native language leads to obvious issues, such as social and practical. I strongly concur with this statement and will delve in this essay.

    According to my perspective, masses overseas find difficulties in interacting with people around them, due to lack of sufficient vocabulary. Consequently, people’s social life gets affected, as they are unable to make new friends in a foreign country. For instance, international, Asian students studying in Germany are not capable of engaging themselves with German speakers due to the language barrier. This may lead to detrimental effects on student’s social life in Germany. To put in another way, international scholars in Germany, generally do not receive better internship opportunities in Germany as they are unable to convince employers owing to lack of German-speaking skills.

    Not to mention, talking in non-native tongue results in various daily life’s complexities. One of the causes is the non-presentation of ideas. To give an illustration, most of the time visitors are unable to express their diseases precisely in front of a doctor, despite living for years in a foreign place. Since doctors cannot rehab the diseases without knowing the actual problem, the visitor’s issues remained chronic. On the other hand, it is likely to get the wrong items in a foreign country by pronouncing things in a wrong way. For example, words like flour and flower both sounds the same when pronounced in the English language, hence it is likely to acquire flour instead of flowers from a shopkeeper due to incorrect pronunciation.

    To conclude, in my view, the language barrier has an immense effect on individuals, social and real life and might turn into serious hurdles for the people living outside their country for a longer duration.

  20. Anna says:

    Task 1:
    The two maps show the changes that the roads to get to the hospital city had in three years, from 2007 to 2010. According to this information, the main roads were maintained in the same place. However, there were certain facilities that were added and removed.
    One of the most important improvements was in the area around the Hospital road. In 2007, this road was surrounded by six bus tops and a cark park that was staff and public. However, in 2010, all the bus stops were removed and they were relocated in a new a bus station that was built just in the west of the city. The cark park, that was previously staff and public, in 2010 it was turned staff. Nevertheless, a new public car park was built on the right hand of the City Hospital. Moreover, two roundabouts were constructed, which connect the three main roads: Ring, Hospital and City roads.
    In general, the improvements in roads access to the hospital city were in organizing the bus station and dividing public and staff car park, respectively. Additionally, there were added two roundabouts.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Car park that was for staff and public, for is missing here. Just in the west, just should not be used here. Previously for staff and public, again for is missing. It was reserved for staff not turned staff. Wrong use of word nevertheless here. On the right side of not right hand of hospital. Two roundabouts were added not there were added two roundabouts. Please watch the video that we have made on map changes on our official youtube channel it will help you to improve your attempt.

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  21. Kashif says:

    Language is a key for the smooth transfer of ideas and thoughts. People who are not residing in their home country have to use different linguistic options to communicate. This can lead to a number of social and practical problems. This essay will discuss why I completely agree with this proportion.

    Starting with the social problems, the main problem is the inability to share our side of story effectively. Living in a society means facing people often, and carry out daily life activities. This will not be possible without speaking the words that they understand. For instance, German is very commonly used in Germany and if we are living there then we need to learn it. In addition, this will create difficulties in doing routine chores such as buying groceries from a supermarket.

    Second problem is not getting successful in education and professional life. If a person is not comfortable with a distinct language, yet he is forced to speak it then he will not perform well. Students usually pick up lessons in a faster way when they are taught in a language which is easy to comprehend. For example, an English speaking student will fail to achieve good grades in a class where French is used more than English. In addition, this will result in isolation of students resulting adverse effects in their future. Majority of the jobs’ requirement is fluency in a foreign language, thus this makes it difficult for the graduates to land a job quickly.

    In conclusion, foreign language can create problems for an individual to express him/herself in a better way, and also provide hindrances succeeding in a professional life. In my opinion, I completely agree with the problems associated living in a foreign country.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Agree with this argument or opinion not proportion, proportion means ratio or share of something. Do not write him/ herself use only one. Not provide hindrances but cause hindrances. It is a good attempt but needs a lot of improvement for that please watch the video on task 2 on our official youtube channel. Also watch the vocabulary videos to incorporate better words in your essay.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0_23FBCnMY

      • Kashif says:

        Thank you for your feedback. Please mention mistakes in my body paragraph?

        • IELTS MASTER says:

          There are no grammatical or English wise mistakes in your body paragraph. The only feedback on your body paragraph is to use better vocabulary and rest we have already mentioned in our previous comments.

  22. Marie Ngolofwana says:

    Residing in a nation where one has to use an alien language can have dentrimental effects on them both socially and practically. I totally agree with this notion because if a person is not well conversant with a non-native language, they may find it difficult to form friendship bonds. Moreover, working in an environment where you have to use a language you do not know too well can break communication bridge.

    Living in a country where a person is mandated to use a language that is not their own makes it unlikely for them to create friendship with native speakers of that language. This is especially true if one knows little or completely nothing about the language. Such people fail to interact with the people they find there ,thereby leading to a feeling of loneliness. One sociologist proved this phenomenon true when he conducted a study on people who live in the diaspora. In his hypothesis, he showed that over three thirds of those people had no friends and were striken with boredom.

    Residents of foreign lands usually have problems with communicating to their colleagues at work. communication skill is a vital component of a successful employment. Where an employee is not able to communicate effectively due to language barrier, work output is often hindered. This in turn can lead to a failing Company. The Work and Industry magazine of the United States of America reported that most of the Companies that shutdown attributed their failure to operate to engaging over half the total number of employees who could not communicate effectively in English.

    In conclusion, staying in a non-native country makes it difficult for one to make friends because they do not know the language used and this can cause one to be lonely. Moreover, it also disrupts effective communication at work which has a negative impact on the company they work for.

    315 words.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Its detrimental not dentrimental. The first sentence is incoherent because in first part you have written one hast to and in the last part you have used word them which is used for more than one person. Your introduction is not proper, please see our video on writing task 2 on our official youtube channel on how to attempt writing task 2. The same mistake in first line of second paragraph, a person and then their. Three third not thirds. Communicating with colleagues not to. Do not write company with capital C. Your English is good and have used some good words. But you need to make a better introduction and if possible can include some more good words for example instead repeating language again and again you can use the word dialect. And make sure you watch the below video.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0_23FBCnMY

  23. Neharikha says:

    Can someone tell me Where should I post my writing answers to get it corrected?

  24. Neharikha says:

    In Today’s world Migration has become more common and necessary to make one’s life better. People migrate due to various reasons like job, education, tourism ..excetra. Though migration have many benefits but people who are migrating face some social and practical problems due to the foreign language.
    To illustrate the social problems, as language is the best way to communicate with others but when people are in foreign countries they feel very difficult to communicate with foreign dialect. This may lead people to end up with few or no friends to communicate. Some surveys tells that people living in foreign countries have one or two friends with them. This loneliness may lead to some serious mental problems like depression.

    To describe about the practical problems, some common public places like Railway Station, airports ..etc have their instructions given in both foreign and common language. But in some places like urban healthcare centre’s, shops, church,..etc the instructions are given in foreign language which is difficult for the ousiders to understand and articulate.

    The language barriers also plays an important role in their workstations because when people have difficulties in communicating it reduces the efficiency of the work and produce serious work related issues.

    To conclude, Though staying in a foreign countries gives people an opportunity to learn a new language, but till they get stabilized and learn the new language they will have certain serious impacts on social and practical life.

  25. Nauman Ashraf says:

    Language is a medium of communication where people can convey his or her message to other people, so language is an essential part of living in a country, for several reasons which I will explain further I hundred percent agree that foreign language speaking in another country stem plenty of problems.
    First of all, each countries has its own language, custom and tradition which national are understand very well as we all know our national language, it takes time to understand the foreign language meanwhile language is important part of the living over here, for instance, people need job for survival and getting a job language matter a lot, if you have a good command on their language you would be able to get job otherwise it would be most difficult to live in foreign country.
    Secondly, it is often said that, good friends make life easier for example they helps when you are in tough situation, and making plethora of friends in country where you are not a native speaker, would cause socially loneness ,
    To sum up, although people speak foreign language in second countries and many of them have very high grip on second language, but in many situations that I mention above cause somehow in spending life.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      You cannot use his/ her with people because his is singular and people are plural. Rather than 100% agree write I completely concur with the statement. Each countries wrong phrase, each means one not plural. Language matters a lot not matter. Would be most difficult, most is wrongly used here. They help not helps, you make this mistake repeatedly using ‘s’ ‘es’ with plural verbs. Last line of conclusion is not proper.

  26. Nauman Ashraf says:

    Dear sir,
    First of all, I know its 97 words only i am always able to write only limited word, could you please add word in this report?

    The maps illustrates the road accessed to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010, overall, it can be seen that there was tremendous changing made over the period.
    There was lot of empty space nearby city hospital which used for the bus station which gave two path way one to the hospital main entrance and second one to the city road roundabout. Moreover, a public car park constructed for the parking of car, before that was paring on corners of the hospital road, in addition, city road upgraded with a roundabout for the better flow of traffic.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Please watch this video it will help you to make more and better sentences and then submit your answer again. We cannot make answers for you this is not a good practice, you should try to make sentences whether wrong or right that is irrelevant. First goal is to meet word limit. Because this will hurt you in the actual exam if somebody else makes statements for you.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  27. SAMIR says:

    In the last decade or so, many immigrants and students are moving abroad to settle or study abroad and language barrier is becoming the talk of the town. I strongly agree with the opine that many of these have to face social and practical problems in every day life. This essay will discuss the reasons with examples, what difficulties these people are facing on foreign land.

    First and foremost, it has been seen that in early years people cannot able to adjust themselves in new atmosphere because of language barriers. Most people cannot communicate with native people well due to change of accent and adaptability of new language. Secondly, there are several sectors which demands proficient native language for applying white-color jobs in government and private departments in which foreign workers lacks. As a consequence, they loose confidence to talk with others which leads them to solance and this loneliness leads them to several diseases.

    Moreover, another language problems relating to students who are studying abroad found extremely difficult to cope with complex foreign language while sitting in competitive government examinations and persuing higher degrees. For instance, an article by forbes magazine has stated that these cases of language problems have been increased in the past few years which gives negative impact on society and people are becoming anti-social.

    To recapitulate, after considering all the above mentioned reasons we can confidently state that these reasons can cause many problems like social differences among people which leads them on negative side in every way.
    253 words

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      I strongly agree with the opinion not opine, opine is a verb. Facing in foreign land not on. People are not able to adjust, not cannot able to adjust. Sectors which demand not demands because sectors is plural. Workers lack not lacks, same mistake of using ‘s’ ‘es’ with plural verb. It is white collar jobs not white color jobs. Solance? Find extremely difficult not found. Have been increasing not increased. Not we can but I can because in the task your opinion is asked not of others. Your attempt is OK but a lot of small grammatical mistakes. You need to work on that and need to incorporate better vocabulary for higher bands. This attempt will get you only 6 bands. So please watch our writing lessons especially on task 2 and vocabulary on our official channel to improve your attempt.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0_23FBCnMY

  28. thanu says:

    The two maps present road access to a City hospital in 2007 and 2010
    Overall, in the year 2010, there was a few road access to the City hospital.But, it shows a great great progress by 2010.
    In 2007, only one entrance was situated for both the staff of the hospital and public.Therefore, traffic congestion can be increased when enter the hospital.By the 2010, public car park was located on the east of the City hospital and staff car park of the hospital was on the south of the hospital.
    Near the hospital,the bus stop was located to get on and off in 2007.But in the year 2010, Bus station was moved to the hospital road which was combined to the roundabouts.Therefore, this was a great road plan to the people to reduce the traffic jams and air pollution.

    which score can you get me?

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      There was a few road access to hospital, the sentence formation is not correct. Great is written twice. Entrance was situated is not right it is not entrance it is car parking area. Therefore traffic congestion can be increased – never give your own meaning or understanding in task 1 just write what is shown in the figure. Again great road plan – avoid making such suggestions in task 1. You will get 1 out of 3 bands in this task.

  29. thanu says:

    Among the world-wide people who have to face the biggest problem which is the language barrier.I believe that,using the modern technology is a good solution for that.
    Frankly speaking, when we convey foreign language, it will be caused to spread social issues.Moreover, communication is included as the major part of dealing with others which happens a breakdown understanding among the people.For an example,as the Asian country Japan has an own mother language to convey with others which is affected to the foreigners who is living there.I think, people should use the common language for communicating with others.I strongly agree with the above idea which is mentioned about the social problems.

    Furthermore, in the prevailing community, it wil be happened lots of practical problems like cultural concepts.In every country in the wold have own rules,taboos and restrictions and all of living people should respect them to protect the rules.Not only them all foreigners should follow these rules.Otherwise, it will be happen practical problems among the people.Some countries are multicultural people who obey to the their culture and religion.When we working with them, we should respect to their cultural values as the foreigners. As well as, foreigners have to face a big problem while they travelling around the country which means they should need a support from the country residents by asking some road directions.But with the progress of the technology, some applications such as Google Maps of the cellular phones help to know the correct directions of the path.technology has helped to reduce the pragmatic issues.

    I only partly agree with the above statement in the question.Not knowing a language when living in a country can be caused the unrest issues but pragmatic concern have been reduced with the development of the modern technology.In the future, there will be have a common language to deal with world-wide people.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Your introduction is still not correct. Please watch our video on task 2 carefully and make the introduction according to the pattern mentioned in the video. We focus too much on introduction because a bad introduction will immediately put a bad impression in examiner’s mind and will hurt your chances of getting good bands in writing. A good introduction can cover up for few mistakes later in the essay but a bad introduction is unacceptable. So first work only on introduction and try to perfect it and then move to the later part of the essay.

  30. thanu says:

    Thank you sir.I’ll check them.again thanks for supporting me

  31. thanu says:

    I will try to write the introduction.How is the content of the essay?what are the mistakes of task 2?

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Content is fine but your sentence structure formation is also not correct in some of the sentences please work on that as well.

  32. Sayali Vaidya says:

    Different countries have different languages and different specialty. In Mexico, Spanish is the native language spoken. Whereas in the United State of America, English is the language which is widely accepted all over the country. In today’s world, we have seen most of the people go to another country for their higher education. Actually, it is a very difficult phase for a person to adjust in such a country where he has not been before. So, I agree with the statement that a person can face serious social problems and practical problems too.

    When a person is going to the United States of America then it is a must for him to know a foreign language. Else he will face problems like not understanding the important discussions, avoiding to speak in public, not able to express his feelings, etc. For instance, Alexa is an international student and new to city Illinois. She has to mandatorily use the English language. She knows English but not very well. When a social work is assigned to every student regarding door service to the residents for certain marketing project then she hesitates to do this because she lacks fluency. Hence, this will improve gradually but it will take time. As proverb, “Practice makes man perfect”. So, speaking a foreign language can cause such social problems. In addition to this, Alexa can also face practical problems like completing her practical assignments. When a practical journal assignment is given to students to complete, then in such case, she is facing the problem of explaining her views. In spite of knowing the complete process and work layout of the project, she is not able to explain it precisely.

    Hence, before going to another country one should update himself/herself to that extent that he will not face any sort of political or social problems. Moreover to get rid of such problems international students have to clear IELTS/ TOEFL exam as it is the English proficiency language. And, people going for tourism in another country should learn at least a basic language which is must for that country.

    Therefore, as per my opinion, I agree with the statement that it may cause social and practical problems in a country where you have to speak a foreign language. But, no worries if people are old enough and cannot learn a foreign language. Residents of a particular country are there always to help such people. Moreover, we can also assign a guide throughout our trip who can explain to us each and everything in our language.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Your essay is too long, no IELTS examiner will check the complete essay hence it will be marked incompletely. Task 2 should not be more than 320 words. Please make it more precise within 320 words and submit again.

  33. Sayali Vaidya says:

    Thank you for your immediate reply. I appreciate your work. I would be happy enough if you give me Band for this topic. As my exam is approaching.

    Different countries have various native languages. In Mexico, Spanish is spoken all over. Whereas, in United States of America, English is the language accepted all over the country. In today’s world, we have seen most tourists visit other countries to explore the world. And, some go to other countries for higher education. So, in both cases, one can face social and practical problems.

    When a person is going to the US then it is a must for him to learn a foreign language. Otherwise, he can face some problems like not understanding the discussions, avoiding to speak in public, etc. For instance, my friend Alexa is an international student in Chicago, IL. Though she knows English still she hesitates to talk in public. Once there was a social task given to all the students to make a free door service to the residents living in that locality. But, Alexa was feeling shy to do because she was not confident about her speaking fluency. I think this is a big serious problem which she needs to improve. In addition to this, she also faces problems in making her practical journals. In spite of knowing the complete theory and layout of the project, she is unable to express her views in the project.

    But, no worries if people are old enough and cannot learn a foreign language. Residents of that country are always happy to help oldies. Moreover, they can also appoint a guide to explore the country.

    Therefore, as per my opinion, I agree with the statement that it may cause social and practical problems explained above if you go to a country where you have to speak a foreign language.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      If your exam is approaching then we highly recommend that you subscribe to our official youtube channel and watch all video lessons on reading and writing, especially on task 2 because we see a major flaw in your essay and that is improper introduction. A bad introduction means lower band score which here is the case because it does not meet the evaluation criteria. Please watch this video and try to start with a better introduction. With this kind of introduction you will get maximum of 4 bands out of 6 in task 2 with more chances of 3.5. Your English is good but you need to write essay as per the marking criteria of IELTS which you will learn in this video.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0_23FBCnMY

  34. Language can pose a serious barrier when two or more people can not communicate effectively. It is often thought by many that Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can lead to social and practical challenges.In my opinion, I totally agree with the statement that foreign language can cause both social and practical issues like making new friends and getting a job in a reputable company.

    Firstly, when there is a language barrier, it is extremely different for new immigrants to socialise freely in such environment, thus making it almost impossible to make new friends as they can not understand each other. This makes visitors or tourist feel unwelcome in such societies. For instance,a survey carried out by Association of Embassy centers revealed that a significant number of people migrate to English speaking countries such as USA, Canada in contrast to places like Russia, Saudi-Arabia due to language differences.

    On the other hand, foreign language can also create practical problems such as getting a well paid job. Most often, when a job applicant has all the is qualified for a position but can’t communicate in the native dialect, there could be reduced chances of the person getting the job because he is perceived as someone who can not hold a good conversation with clients which is bad for business. Thus this would leave a negative impact on on their work-life. For example, a research conducted in Quebec showed that their employers prefer to employ people who can speak French rather than English because it is a French speaking province.

    In conclusion, I strongly believe that staying in a Nation where one has to speak their official language can pose serious social and practical issues such as making new friends and getting a desired job.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Cannot is one word not can not. Living l should be small not capital. Do not write in my opinion I totally agree simply write I completely concur with the statement or in my opinion these problems are genuinely faced by people where language is not a common among two persons. Avoid repeating words for example you have repeated language and barrier in the first lines of first and second paragraph. Try to bring variety by using better vocabulary because without good vocabulary you cannot score more than 6.5 bands in IELTS, for example instead of language you can use the word dialect (we seed you have used it later good) and for barrier you can use a differentiating factor. Always use the with USA and UK. There should be and between USA, Canada. There should not be – between Saudi Arabia. Your starting of second paragraph is wrong. On the other hand is used when you present the opposite but here you are continuing with the issue that is problems created by language difference. Do not use short forms can’t always write complete words cannot. Nation should be with small n not capital N. In conclusion you have used the same words used above. Your conclusion should summarize what is written above but in different words. Your attempt is good but needs small improvements for that please watch our video lesson on how to write task 2 and also watch vocabulary lessons on our official youtube channel.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0_23FBCnMY

  35. RINAL KANSARA says:

    It is irrefutable that some people often desire living in another country.Since individuals migrate to another country,they have embarked on learn foreign languages.However some people advocate that foreign language is a blessings for them,some believe it is a cure.Furthermore,i personally opine that learning foreign language is a fruitful for individuals and in the following section both views will be discussed.
    To commence with,speaking foreign language is certainly essential because when people migrate,they are unable to understand the dialect of the local people.Also,a person who has better communication skill can work efficiently at work as well as it assist employer to earn handsome perks at job and make shiny future of their offspring.Secondly,language is the identity of the country therefore,if individuals of other country embrace holistically customs,tradition and culture of the host country,it bestows a lot of thrill to people of host country when people respect their language.Moreover,there are less conflicts and it paves the way for harmonious relationship.To illustrate,every year 50% people have been giving ielts exam to learn english language which aids them to work in the Usa,Uk,Canada.
    On the contrary,speaking foreign language has detrimental effect owing to welcome other languages,people forget their own culture and some languages have extinct certainly.Additionally,it is absolutely arduous to pass in depth
    knowledge of native language to other generation.
    To recapitulate,although language is a pride of the nation, learning foreign language broaden the horizon of individuals and it has profound rewarding influence in individuals life and due to scant knowledge of language,it is difficult to communicate with people.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      You always start with this phrase ‘it is irrefutable’ try to change it start with better lines. You can check those impressive starts by topic on our website in our blog section. They have embarked on learn is wrong – they have to learn foreign language to survive in the country they have migrated to. Your ending of introduction is not proper because it does not state clearly what the task is and that is lack of knowledge of local language can cause social and practical problems and there is no mention of this in the introduction. Without proper introduction you cannot score more than 6 bands in writing. We will move step by step. First you need to learn to write proper introduction. Please watch our lesson on how to write perfect introduction and then we will move to the next part. If you desire to go from 5.5 to 7 bands then every part of your essay has to be perfect. And you have to be practical because it is very difficult to make an improvement of 1.5 bands in writing in one month because it takes a lot of practice and improvement. So read our blog on how to write introductions on different topics and then watch our lesson on task 2 and first improve your introduction.

  36. Anjali says:

    The map below describes the various changes developed in the roadways accessible to a City hospital over a 3 year period.
    Overall, it is clearly observed that significant changes has been made in the car parking and public transport facilities since 2007.
    In 2007, the public and the hospital staff used to park the car under one roof . There were lots of bus stops noted in the hospital road .
    One significant development has been noticed in the hospital road in 2010 . Two roundabouts had been constructed which was not present earlier in the year 2007. The first roundabout was built in between the city road and the hospital road ,followed by the second one which was connected to ring road .Additionally,the bus stops were replaced by a new bus station in the south -west corner of the City hospital which was connected to the two roundabouts.

    Another major change has been made in the car parking sites. Provision of separate car parking for the staff and the public has been introduced . Common car parking has been replaced by staff car parking and the car parking facilities for the public has been developed in the Ring road which is in north -east direction of City hospital.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      The various changes happened not developed. It can be clearly observed not is clearly observed. Changes had been made not has been because timeline is of past not present. There were 3 bus stops on either side of the hospital road is a better sentence formation. One significant development happened in the hospital road in 2010. Which were not present since its two therefore here were should be used not was. Both roundabouts were constructed at either end of the hospital road. You have used has in the entire task which is wrong because changes were made in 2010 that is past so had should be used. Also you need to work on your sentence structure and improve it. Please watch our lessons on task 1 and how to attempt map changes to improve your attempt. The links are given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIBUOHdFKII

      • anjali says:

        Thanks for the immediate reply ,so that i will be very cautious in writing next time . i had made lots of grammatical errors .Would u please tell me how much bands for task 1 and task 2 are rated and i would like know the score for this essay in order to improve further.

        • IELTS MASTER says:

          Task 1 is of 3 bands and task 2 is of 6 bands. For this attempt your score would be 1-1.5 bands maximum. Please watch our tutorials on task 2 and task 1 to understand how these are evaluated and how you must attempt to get the maximum band score in writing.

  37. HAKEEM JIMOH says:

    The differences in the languages we speak is a common issue in many countries. If people reside in a foreign country, this means they have to acquire new language skills. This in turn causes issues such as social and practical ones. I completely agree with these statements and this essay will highlight some points in favour of the above statements.

    To start with, the social issue attached to language barriers in a foreign country is the difficulty in mingling with the locals. For instance, when I relocated to Korea, it was extremely difficult to make new friends because 8 out of every 10 citizens did not understand my language. Subsequently, it took me longer to meet new people and this was boring for the first few months of my stay. As a result, I had to spend most of my time alone or with people whom understood my language. These are the reasons learning how to speak a new language can be a difficult task for many.

    Another major issue is the practical problem of reading maps on a daily basis. Many people find it daunting to translate these maps because they were originally drawn in their local language. For example, I usually got lost on the streets whenever I travelled to North Korea because their maps were in Korean and I could not read them. Many countries have their road maps in their language, and this makes it challenging for foreigners to use. Therefore, this is a real-world scenario that could happen to anyone who embarks on travelling to stay in a foreign country.

    To conclude, it is obvious that language differences can cause many issues. Problems such as socialising, as well as practical ones like using maps are among the issues of learning a new language in order to stay in a foreign country. In the future, the use of state of the art applications like google translator will really help translate thousands of languages for people who want to become residents in a foreign country.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Brilliant attempt with very few mistakes and good points. ‘with people whom understood’ it should be who here. You just need to make minor adjustments including try to incorporate few more good words for example instead of language you could have used local dialect and so on. Also please watch our tutorial on task 2 so that you are aware of how it is evaluated and what are the common mistakes which you must avoid in your future attempts. Otherwise it is a very good attempt something which is rare for a new user of our website. The link to the tutorial is given below, make sure you watch it carefully and also watch our vocabulary lessons. If you can add in a few more good words you can easily score at least 7 in writing.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A0_23FBCnMY

  38. Jagmeet kaur says:

    The given maps explains the entrence of City Hoapital in 2007 and 2010.
    overall, it can be easily seen that the structure of hospital in its initial year was more simple,however some drastic changes took place in2010 which made the strucre complex.
    In 2007 hospital was surrounded byRing road which continued to be like this in 2010. But in 2007there was only one carpark on the south-east area just next to hospital rd which was linked withring road on its north and city road in its south. Following it, was bus stop.
    whereas in 2010 seperate car park were established for both public and staff. Public parking was situated on east side of hospital,while staff parking was situated between ring road and city road. on the opposite of it was busstation. one thing which is noticeable is that it had two roundabouts one was at south nd other was next to city hospital that connected city road, bus stand and two parkings.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      The given maps explain not explains because maps are plural hence you cannot use ‘s’ ‘es’ with verb. rd? never write short forms even in practice because then you develop this habit and it will happen in real test as well since humans are a creature of habit. You have written in one single paragraph you need to structure it better in 3-4 paragraphs another habit which should be part of your practice tests. Please structure it properly first and then submit again for checking. And watch our tutorial on maps and changes in task 1 it will help you to improve your attempt a lot, the link is given below. So watch the lesson and structure it better before submitting again. Thanks.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  39. Nino Lascano says:

    The two maps illustrate the changes in road access at City Hospital in the year 2007 and 2010.

    Overall, the bus stop had been removed in 2010. Also, the car park for the public and employees had been separated in two places. Moreover, two roundabouts had been created after 3 years.

    In 2007, the City Hospital was situated inside the Ring road. At the Hospital road, three bus stops are available on its west and east side. Furthermore, the car park for the public and staff was on the right side of the Hospital road.

    In 2010, there was a tremendous progress in the road access at the City Hospital. The newly built public car park was on the east side of the City Hospital, whilst the staff car park remained at the same location. Lastly, the bus stops had been removed to pave the way for the construction of the two roundabouts, which connects to a new bus station on the west.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘At the Hospital road, three bus stops are available on its west and east side’ the better to write is – three bus stops were present on the either side of the hospital road in 2007. In the last paragraph you have used both tenses past and present with the verbs which is a big mistake. Stick to one tense only preferably past tense because the map is of past 2010. Your overall command over the language is good and you can easily score at least 6.5-7 bands in writing is you perform well on all the evaluation parameters and avoid any grammatical errors.

  40. Frances says:

    Good day sir, please evaluate my easts and provide corrections where necessary.

    The maps below illustrates road access to a hospital city in 2007 and 2010.
    Overall, a glance at the maps depict a tremendous changes that occurred within 3 year period 2007 to 2010. It was observed that new constructions and renovations were made.
    In 2007, the city hospital lies inside the ring road located towards the northern part of the city. The hospital road is situated on the south end of the city surrounded by the bus stop. The road leading to the city from the hospital is located on the eastern part of the town. The city hospital has only one lot for parking of cars that is utilised by the staff of the clinic alongside the general public.
    In 2010,there was a tremendous changes that were made. The hospital still located inside the ring road has a new parking lot for the public to use which lies on the eastern part of the city. However, the previous parking space is now strictly for the staff of the clinic. Furthermore, a new bus station was constructed adjacent to the hospital road with each end leading to the newly constructed roundabout.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Renovations were done not made. You have used present tense for the 2007 map which is wrong because it is of past for example, ‘is situated’, ‘has only one lot’ ‘is utilised by’, here past tense should be used with ‘was’ and ‘had’. ‘In 2010,there was a tremendous changes that were made. The hospital still located inside’ incoherent sentence because in first sentence you are mentioning tremendous changes and in the very next sentence you are saying hospital still located inside the ring road, you should write ‘While the hospital was still located inside the ring road, a new parking lot was constructed’. Again you have mixed present tense wit past tense in the last paragraph which is a mistake. Please take note of this. You must watch our tutorial on how attempt Map in task 1, the link to the tutorial is given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  41. frances adaluvf says:

    many people are increasingly migrating their country to another in search of a greener pasture, and a lot of them tend to be faced with language problems. residing in a country where one has to speak a dialect different from their native language can lead to social and practical problems. this essay will argue why I completely agree with this statement.
    on the other hand, people who leave their country to another one have a reason and purpose of migration, because most of them feel that they can achieve a fast means of livelihood such as profitable employment and a good quality of education despite the problem they tend to encounter with language. in addition, people believe that they can meet up with the challenges they encounter and provide solutions to it. however, despite all this, a lot of problems still arise with language issues
    firstly, people who live in another region are faced with several social problems such as communication barriers. they tend to find it tough to socialize with people of that country especially in an area where English is not their native language. For example, a recent study carried in Germany showed that about 80% of foreigners in Germany find it difficult to socialize with the Germans. in addition, these problems lead to isolation which accounts for the high increase in mental conditions like depression.
    secondly, a lot of practical issues arise with regards to the language barrier. people find it difficult to secure good employment due to the fact that they can not express themselves in that native dialect. for instance, many Nigerians who are graduates residing in Germany experience challenges with regards to employment due to the communication gap.
    in conclusion, despite the fact that it is good for people to move to another country for better living, the truth still remains that life is difficult for them due to the barrier in communication leading to isolation and health issues like depression and also difficulty with employment.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      greener pastures not pasture. Starting of second paragraph is wrong, ‘on the other hand’ is used when you are about discuss the second or opposite viewpoint but in the first body paragraph you discuss the first viewpoint. cannot is one word not can not. Your basic English is good with no grammatical errors which is a plus point. But you need to work more on making better points, using better vocabulary and avoiding points. Your essay seems a bit repetitive, one major reason for this use of the same words which you must avoid to score good bands in writing.

  42. Preetham says:

    With the rapid advancement of technology in today’s world,nations are thriving towards success.People are free to move to any part of the world and have a peaceful life ,although some problems come along the way.Its true and i agree that living in a different country and speaking foreign language can cause social and practical problems.
    Vast nations like America,Canada,U.K are accepting immigrants all around the world.Many are leaving their own country to go to foreign nations in the hope of having a better life, while certain rules and regulations are to be followed in order to live in a different country.Language barrier is one the problems faced by the people living in other nations.This can also lead to social and practical problems.If one cannot speak or understand the foreign language it will be difficult for them to survive as they cannot communicate in a proper way.Furthermore they cannot understand the terminologies related to their work and it would be a serious problem and would affect their jobs.Different nations implies different culture and one need not to accept it but has to respect it.
    However,nations conduct different examinations for those who aspire to study in their country which mainly includes language test.One has to pass the test which allows them to got to different countries and getting an admission in the universities also depends upon the score in the examination.Their main intention behind these tests are that people would not find it as difficult as it would be if they come with no prior knowledge.It would help them to adjust to the newness that each country offers and there would not be any social or practical problems even the problems related to work.Since everyone has their own ability in learning things people can still face problems but one may not say it would be the same case with everyone as it varies from person to person.
    Speaking a foreign language in a country where we live might be difficult and have certain issues associated with it but having said that this is not the case for everyone and it varies from one individual to another based on their capability to learn a new language,adjusting to their social environment and many others.
    Can you please evaluate my answer.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Avoid using short forms like its, better to write it is. America is not the proper word for the nation, write the USA. Always use the with UK and not U.K. ‘one the problems faced’ one of the problems. ‘If one cannot speak or understand the foreign language it will be difficult for them’ sentence is incoherent because in the beginning you have written if one and later you have used the word for them, which is mismatch within the same sentence. ‘Different nations implies’ imply not implies. ‘one need not’ one needs not. ‘got to different countries’ go to not got to.

  43. Pooja Bhide says:

    Question:
    Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both views and give your opinion

    Answer:
    Some people think that modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable.

    Nowadays technology has taken first place in everyone’s life.The usage of the internet is increasing gradually. According to recent study in world the usage of
    technology is more the 50%.For communication, many people are using internet.To send text messages, audio’s and video’s internet plays a vital role. And through
    internet we can send any type of message in fraction of seconds.People are very attracted to it because, in this busy modern world to socialize with one another,
    it is taking very less time and less money. For example, in olden days people used to send information through post, it used to take more than 3 days from one place to
    another. but now it is taking less than half minute it is because of technology.

    The known fact is, for any thing it has some limits, if we cross the limits it leads to destroyed. Some people says that technology is making less sociable,
    because before technology to know any information people used to know from another by one on one conversation physically. but now it has changed a lot. To know
    anything people are using internet. For example google, YouTube etc. It leads to less socializing. It has effecting form the childhood. Earlier children used to
    go out and they used to play with friends but now in growing modern technology kids are playing games in phones, iPads and in laptops, so interaction between
    the people is decreasing.

    In conclusion,using the technology is not a bad thing,but using it in excess percentage leads to many disadvantages. I can say socializing one on one is more valuable
    than by the technology.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Please attempt tasks given on this website only. Do not submit task of your own so that feedback given can help other students as well.

  44. James says:

    Please evaluate my easy and provide necessary coreections.
    The maps illustrate how the city hospital roads network were rehabilitated between 2007 and 2010. The redesign of the roads enhanced the accessibility by the staff and public, having introduced roundabout before the city hospital and that really facilitated ease access to the hospital in 2010. Reposition of the car parking lot meant for both the staff and public have beautify the city hospital as well restructure the design of the entire road network is from the city road to the city hospital. In 2007 there were bus stop before advancing to the main entrance of the city hospital, they were dismantled and reconstructed to far southwest zone of the hospital which had reduced unnecessary stress which the road users would have been suffered during 2007. Two new roundabout were constructed, the first was constructed at immediate junction of city road off the city hospital and the second was built after the public bus stop. Therfore, the rehabilitation of the city hospital Road network in 2010 had created a better accessibility for both the staff and the public as shown in the 2010 map compared to as it was in 2007 which would had been causing obstruction for both and as well leading to hold-up when navigati9 the hospital.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Do not use the word rehabilitated it is generally used for persons who are in trouble and are saved from that trouble. ‘facilitated ease access’ easy access. ‘staff and public have beautify the city hospital’ it is grammatically incorrect and does not fit with the sentence. There is no structure to your task with no paragraphs. Please structure it in a proper manner with at least 4 paragraphs and submit again.

  45. WalSH199 says:

    The two maps represent the street ability to a town hospital between 2007 AND 2010.

    At the beginning, in map of 2007 the access of the hospital road was more easier to describe than the map of 2010 and the reason behind that was life changing and developing to be more helpful and that showed in the map of 2010. Furthermore, in 2007, there weren’t a particular bus station and that made kinda of mess in the area, cause the busses stopped behind the hospital enter. However, in 2010, there was an area for bus station between two roundabout and that made the hospital access more organized. Also, in 2007, the staff and public cars shared the same parkings area, but in 2010, they arranged the main parkings into two private cars parks, one for staff cars and the other for public cars.

    In general, the street access to a city hospital in 2010 was more organized than 2007 and they offered more spaces for transportation parkings to move on and made more parkings with identifying cars that could stand in.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      You have written in a very informal way. This style would not get you more than 6 bands in writing. Please watch our lesson on how to attempt maps in task it will help you to improve your style of writing. The link to the lesson is given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

      • Wshi7 says:

        Oh no is that very terrible ? What can I do? Is it just in my style of writing or there’s grammar errors or because of vocabularies? Could you explain more to me because I need to get +6.5 . Is that impossible for me?

        • IELTS MASTER says:

          Do not worry much. It is not that much terrible. Just keep practicing and implementing our feedback and your writing will improve gradually.

  46. Steve says:

    Please, evaluate my writing. Thank in advance.

    The two maps allow us to see the changes in the road access to a City Hospital among 2007 and 2010.

    According to the 2007 City Hospital map, along the Hospital Road, there were six bus stops, that in 2010 had been replaced with a relatively large bus station on the southwest side of the City Hospital. We can also notice, that the bus station is connected with the Hospital Road through the two roundabouts that had been introduced.
    One of the roundabouts had been placed on the road that circumnavigate the City Hospital, the Ring Road, and the other one is on the south side of the map on the City Road.

    Moreover, in 2007 there was only one car park for staff and public, while in 2010 parking availability had been improved.
    The public car park had been established on the east side of the City Hospital, so as a result, the former parking had been guaranteed only for hospital employees.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘among 2007 and 2010.’ write in the years 2007 and 2010. ‘along the Hospital Road, there were six bus stops’ better way to write there were six bus tops, three on each side of the road. Overall is a very good attempt. You have a precise writing style which is required in task 1 with no extra details added from your side, a temptation which few students can resist. Please watch our tutorial on how to attempt map in Task 1 it will further help you to make minor changes wherever required. The link to the tutorial is given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  47. Teja says:

    The two maps illustrates about the road access to a metropolitan hospital in 2007 and 2010, year’s, respectively.

    Overall, major changes are observed in transport allotment areas to the city hospital, along with an additional round-about to the far-east of the hospital road.

    In the year, 2010, the bus-station has emerged along with two round-about’s which connect to the end terminals of the city hospital as well city road while in the year 2007, it has limited to several bus-stop’s connected to the adjacent of hospital road.

    Parking place for the staff and public is observed to be in the same place (near-east to the bus stop) without any proper division in the year 2007 but in the year 2010 it is observed to be segregated by allotting different parking spaces for the public and staff. To the far-east of hospital road, a major development is observed in the year 2010 with a round-about.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Illustrates the road access not about the road access. Years not year’s. Roundabout is one word. In the third paragraph you should first discuss the state in 2007 and in the next paragraph discuss the changes that took place in 2010, it gives a proper sequence to your task. You have used present tense in several places like has which is wrong because the maps are from the past. Please watch our tutorial on how to attempt map in Task 1 it will further help you to make minor changes wherever required. The link to the tutorial is given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  48. Theresa Johnson says:

    Hello Sir, please evaluate my essay.

    Residing in a foreign country where people need to talk in their native language can result to a critical social and practical issue. In my opinion, I totally agree with this statement because it can lead to so many negative effects. In this essay I will be discussing the negative effects it can result to.
    Firstly, regarding social issue, it would be tough to communicate and make friends with the locals that does not understand your language or vice versa. For instance, when I was working in Germany as a nurse it was so hard for me to get the medical history of my patients and getting important informations I needed to complete the assessment because I do not understand their language, and they do not speak other language except theirs.
    Secondly, for pratical issue, being in a foreign nation would create many hindrances. For example, when I was going to store in Germany to buy groceries I needed help to ask some details about the items or where to locate those products, and most of the staff in that store does not know English so it was so difficult to express what I wanted to tell them. Moreover, in public transportations I was reluctant to ride and go anywhere because I was so worried I will get lost since I do not know their native language.
    in conclusion, being in a foreign country needs a lot of courage because learning a new language and dealing with people having different culture and beliefs was not that easy. Therefore, I strongly believe in the statement that living in a foreign nation can result to many disadvantages.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘need to talk in their native language’ not inn their native language they are required to communicate in the native language of the country they migrated to. ‘can result to’ can result in not to. ‘social and practical issue’ social and practical issues not issue. Again can result in not to. ‘locals that does not understand’ local who do not, two mistakes, that is always used with non living things and do not does because locals is plural. ‘because I do not understand’ i did not understand because you are giving an example from past. ‘most of the staff in that store does not know English’ did not, not does not. Your essay is full of small grammatical mistakes although these are minor mistakes but their frequent occurrence is a major issue which will result in lower band score. First work on your basic grammar knowledge and rules and try to eliminate these errors.

  49. jazzzz says:

    The two maps illustrate how a city hospital was accessed in 2007 and 2010.
    Overall, maps shows that city went through tremendous changes over the period of 3 years.
    In 2007,there was a city road on the south direction of city hospital with connectivity to hospital road. There were two roads to reach hospital namely ring road and hospital road. There were three bus stations on each side of the hospital road. common parking was there for both public and staff on the eastern side of hospital road.
    In 2010, some extra infrastructure was added though some features remain unchanged. Position of city hospital remained same as that in 2007. A common parking plot in 2007 was made available only for staff. Extra parking plot was added on the western side of the hospital for public. Two roundabout were added ,one on the section of city road and hospital road and other was near the hospital. Bus station was also constructed joining two roundabout.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘maps shows’ maps show not shows because maps are plural hence no ‘s’ or ‘es’ with verb. ‘There were two roads to reach hospital namely ring road and hospital road’ ring road surrounds the hospital, it is not a way to reach the hospital. ‘A common parking plot in 2007’ 2010. Two roundabouts not roundabout.

  50. jazzzz says:

    hello sir!!!!!
    please evalute my essay and give band for this writing.

    Globalization and easy transportation has made it possible to travel different parts of the world. People visits different countries for different purposes such as better education, business opportunity so on. It is expected to know the international language or local language of that country. This essay agrees that people do faces challenges while speaking foreign language. This essay shall intend to discuss social issues faced by people and their impact on daily life.
    Without any doubt, knowing foreign language is an added benefit in terms of better job opportunity and confidence level. However, people might find difficulties while speaking foreign language. As foreign language is a new language for them ,they feel nervous and lacks confidence while speaking . They feel that they are being judged by people around them which moves them away from speaking in public. Lack of confidence never give them a chance to be friends with local people. They become less socialized. They avoid visiting public places. people find it difficult to adjust in new countries and their culture.
    It is always preferable to know to the foreign language to grow in job and business. For instance, a person from india moved to Australia, where English is a native language and working in a marketing company where he always needs to interact with clients. In such cases if he lacks the knowledge of language then his chances of getting promotion might reduce which leads to dissatisfaction and frustration. Because of small friend circle ,person may feel lonely which in turn, leads to depression. Sometimes it affects their mental growth.
    Due to technological advancement ,computer provides support to ease this problem. However,computer cannot be used where face to face interaction is required. To put it in a nutshell, people always find a social issues while speaking foreign language because of lack of knowledge and lack of confidence.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘People visits different’ visit not visits. ‘people do faces’ people do face, people is plural therefore no ‘es’ or ‘s’ with people. Same mistake with lacks. India with capital I. Your sentence structure could be better in this essay. For this essay you will get maximum 4 out of 6.

  51. BOnnie says:

    The 2 maps illustrate how the surroundings of the road around the city hospital had been changed between 2007 and 2010.

    Overall, the surrounding city hospital had undergone development from 2007 to 2010.
    Firstly, there was a ring road around the city hospital and a hospital road which was connected to the ring road. Also, there were 6 bus stops along the hospital road. The car park that was being used for staff and public, was located in the southeast of the city hospital, which was able to pass through the ring road and a city road was situated in the south of the car park.

    Three years later, 2 roundabouts were built between ring road and hospital road, hospital road ad city road respectively. In addition, 6 bus stops had become to a bus station that can be seen in the southwest of the map, was connected to 2 roundabouts.
    In the east of the city hospital, there was a public car park which was separated from the car park where had being used as sharing parking lot in 2007, was able to go through the ring road. Original car park that lied to the right of the hospital road, was replaced staff car park.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘hospital road ad city road respectively’? ‘In addition, 6 bus stops had become to a bus station’ instead write, in 2010 the 6 bus stops were demolished and a single bus stop was constructed on the left side of the hospital road and it was connected to both the roundabouts. Otherwise it is a very good attempt.

  52. Kaur says:

    SIR THIS IS MY FIRST TIME ATTEMPTING IELTS PRACTICE WRITING EXAM, SIR PLEASE ANSWER ME FEW QUESTIONS THAT- 1.IF I PRACTICE ONLY THE TEST U HAVE GIVEN HERE AND DON’T TAKE ANY COACHING , WILL I BE ABLE TO GET READY FOR MY IELTS EXAM?
    2.CAN YOU PLEASE ANSWER ME IN DETAIL ABOUT MY MISTAKES AND SCORE ME WITH A BAND?
    SO SIR HERE IS MY FIRST ACADEMIC WRITING
    The two maps illustrate how the road was accessed to a city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010.
    Overall , in 2010 the bus station and car parking facilities were closer to the city hospital ;however , in 2007 it had been quite challenging reaching to it because of it’s location.
    Specifically , transportation to the city hospital had been quite difficult in 2007 when when people used to travel by bus because the bus stop had located outside the city whilst in the year 2010 a significant difference was noticed in terms of distance.In 2010 the bus station was relocated just on the west to the hospital road from where someone would easily go towards the hospital or the city road as it was connected to both the roundabouts
    In addition , the public and staff parking was initially constructed right to the hospital road whereas in 2010 the public and staff parking were separated.Thus, the staff parking remained at the same place but the public one was moved in the ring road and much closer to the hospital.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      I truly believe that if your English is good then you are simply wasting time and money in any IELTS coaching centre and if your English is not that good then you do not need IELTS coaching you first need English coaching and by that I mean you need to build fundamentals of grammar and vocabulary. Now coming to your task.

      ‘the road was accessed’ road was not accessed but the hospital was accessed through road. In overall first write about 2007 and 2010, write in chronological order. It’s is wrong, not even IELTS trainers in coaching centre correct this basic mistake. It’s means it is here the correct word is its location. ‘Specifically , transportation to the city hospital had been quite difficult in 2007 when when people used’ never give your own meaning to task 1 like transportation was difficult, it is nowhere mentioned in the map, when is written twice. Please watch our tutorials on task 1 and how to attempt maps in task 1 it will help you immensely to improve your attempt. The links to the lessons are given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIBUOHdFKII

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  53. Kaur says:

    Thanx a lot for replying sir….i was eagerly waiting for ur reply…….i will surely try to improve myself and take help from ur videos on task 1 even on task 2 bcz i dont take any other coaching classes.
    But sir can u please tell me as u see my first attempt in ielts, what do u think? Do i need to join a coaching center?
    What band score do i get with the report i have written?
    Can only your youtube videos and ur provided ielts practice exams material get me prepared for my ielts????? Sir please ans to all my queries.Again thanks for replying to my task 1

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      If you want you can give a coaching centre a try for one month and decide for yourself whether it is helping or not. But surely if you practice regularly on our website and follow our tutorials you can prepare by yourself, hundreds of students are doing this only and saving a lot of their time and money. But I do not want you to regret later that you should have joined a coaching centre so I suggest go to a coaching centre for one month and then decide after your experience there. You current attempt will get you 1.5 out of 3 bands in task 1.

  54. Kaur says:

    Ok sir but currently i can’t join a coaching center….so i will practice here and try to improve myself if u help me.

  55. DHANYA JOSEPH says:

    The two maps illustrate , the roadway to a city hospital in the year 2007 and 2010 . In overall , there are some drastic changes occured in the area of pathway to city hospital in a time period of 3 years , especially the development at bus station , car park area and roundabout are noticeable .

    In detail , in the year 2007 , there was only 6 bus stops at both sides of the hospital road , whereas in 2010 it is developed as a bus station at the south west area of the hospital . Also the car park area , in 2007 , it was common for both public and staff , which was located at the south-east area , became separated and relocated in 2010 as at the east for public and at the south east for staff .
    In addition , two roundabouts were built between the years 2007 – 2010 , at the south area . One located at the intersection of intersection of Hospital road and city road , while the other was present at the junction of Ring road and Hospital road . Both roundabouts were linked to the bus station.

    In conclusion , the roadway to city hospital had fabulous changes in the time period between 2007 – 2010 .

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Overall not in overall. ‘there are some drastic changes’ there are is redundant here and should be removed. ‘development at bus station’ development of not at. ‘there was only 6 bus stops’ there were not was, and 3 bus stops on both sides of the road not 6. ‘it was common for both’ it should not come here. ‘became separated and relocated in 2010 as at the east for public and at the south east for staff’ it should be written in separate sentence. ‘at the south area’ wrong way to write. ‘2007 – 2010’ do not write like this, write 2007 to 2010.

  56. DHANYA JOSEPH says:

    Thank you Sir , for correcting my mistakes in the essay..

  57. Sandra says:

    The two maps illustrate the significant changes that occurred to a City hospital’s road routes from 2007 to 2010.

    It can be clearly seen that initially, the Hospital Road to the South of the hospital had no roundabouts. However in 2010, two roundabouts were constructed, on at the start of the road and the other at the approaches the road’s end, connecting to the City road. The two roundabouts are joined to a bus station to the West. On the opposite side of the bus station-towards the East of the Hospital road, the car park which was for staff and public in 2007 is currently allocated for staff only. Whereas the public car park is now situated to the right of the hospital.

    To put it all in a nutshell, it is accentuated that the prominent improvements and replacements too place towards the Southern part of the hospital, while the City road as well as the Ring road experienced no changes.

    (Please evaluate my report and give me a band score from your point of view. Thank you in advance!)

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘on at the start’ you mean one. ‘the other at the approaches’ this is grammatically incorrect. Try to explain in chronological order that is first paragraph should explain the status in 2007 and the second paragraph should talk about the changes that took place in 2010. You have written only one paragraph and that primarily talks about the 2010 status. Never phrases like in a nutshell and other which are used for conclusion because in task 1 there is no conclusion a common mistake which many students make. Please watch our tutorial on task 1 and task 1 maps, these will help you to improve your attempt. The links are given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIBUOHdFKII

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  58. Aisha says:

    The two maps show the layout of the same City Hospital in 2007 and 2010. It is clearly seen that the road access in City Hospital witnessed dramatic transformations as the transport infrastructure was improved.
    The most notable changes can be observed in a common car park, over the years it was divided into staff and public sections, they have been extended and the public car park was relocated to the east side of the hospital. Furthermore, 3 bus stops, which was at each side of the Hospital Road, were removed and converted to bus station to the west of the road.
    Speaking about the Hospital road, in these years it also was completely modernized. During the 3 year period, simple straight road was renovated by construction of two roundabouts at the both ends of the road. It is also worth noting that these roundabouts were connected with bus station making it accessible from each side.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘3 bus stops, which was at each side’ which were not was. Very well written but you need to break the second paragraph into two separate paragraph. There should be at least 3 paragraphs in task 1 to give it better structure and more clarity.

  59. Aisha says:

    Without a doubt, it is believed that people, who live abroad and are obliged to speak foreign language, can face several problems, such as problems in social and practical field. However, some people disagree with this statement, claiming the opposite. In this essay I will attempt to identify major reasons of this issue and express my own opinion on this topic.
    To begin with, it is important to understand how poor language skills can degrade quality of life and lead to practical problems. If person lives in a country whose language is foreign for him, he will have difficulties in ordinary things, like paying debt, buying groceries at shop or going to bank. Even going to the doctor could be problematic, the person might simply misunderstand doctor’s prescriptions and accidently harm his well-being. The countless number of situations, where lack of proper language competence mislead and misguide people, can be named.
    One more important aspect that should be noted is social problems. Person won’t understand native speakers and vice versa, so with time these misunderstandings will push people to limit the number of conversations, making them socially vulnerable and insecure. Having problems at communication the person can face difficulties in making friends or employing to new work. It will be hard to adjust to foreign environment.
    In conclusion, taking into account the above points, I would like to agree that living in a country, where everyone speaks foreign language, can lead to a lot of major and minor problems, both at social and practical field. However this is a temporary circumstance and to avoid those people should improve language skills.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Brilliant attempt with good points. Just couple of observations, introduction could have been better and never use contractions such as won’t, otherwise we do not see much wrong with your essay. Keep writing in the same manner. Good job.

  60. Sandra says:

    The two given maps show before and after refurbishment in a city hospital between 2007 and 2010. Overall, the public car parking area has been built in the East side of the hospital, before the reconstruction only one park has available for staffs and customers.
    We can see that there were six bus stops in the South side of the hospital was realigned into singular bus station with two junctions which have access to the roundabout. In 2007, the shareable/mutual car park for clients and staffs were dedicated only to staffs and beside the east side of the hospital, the public car park has been built. Before the construction, there was a straight road connects the hospital to city road was altered entirely. Especially the entrance of the hospital and juncture between hospital and city road. The two roundabouts were built-in hospital road; the one is front entrance of the hospital, and the other one locates in juncture of hospital road.
    I did not illustrate coherent and thoroughly, it words 160 letters.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘The two given maps show before’ show the structure before. ‘only one park has available’ was available. ‘shareable/mutual’ do not write like this. You need to work on your sentence formation as currently there are several minor grammatical mistakes. Improve your basic grammar first and learn right of use of tense, verbs and prepositions.

  61. Sharon says:

    The given map illustrates access to City hospital by road in 2007 and 2010.

    Overall, it is clear that there was dramatic transformation in the transport facilities over a period of 3 years.

    The most tremendous change took place was on the bus stop area which was located on either sides of the hospital road in 2007. While, in 2010, a new bus station was constructed on the western side of the hospital road, connecting to the City hospital by a roundabout which meets the Ring Road on northern part of the hospital.

    In addition, another modification was on the car parking area. In 2007, the car is for both staffs and public were together in a rectangular area beside the hospital road. However, after 3 years, the public and staff car parking location got seperated where both received dedicated spaces. The former got parking location on the eastern side of the hospital while the latter’s space was fixed at the same area that was shared earlier.
    Furthermore, the hospital road and the city road had been connected by a roundabout , providing access to the bus station.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘another modification was on the car parking area’ another modification was done on the car parking area. ‘the car is for both’ the parking was for both, use past tense because 2007 map is of past not present. Please watch our tutorial on how to attempt task 1 with maps it will help you immensely to improve your attempt.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  62. Narinderpal kaur says:

    The given two layouts illustrate the information about the different approach of road to a urban hospital between 2007 and 2010. In the formal layout, there were three bus stop which was connected to ring road. In the east side, there was a common car park for staff and public. In later layout showed that there was small bus stand completely removed by making new bus station in the west side that was connected with roundabout and ring road. There was a hospital construct between the two roundabout. Further elaborating the layout reflected the major changes can be seen on right side. There was new car parking made for staff members of the hospital that attached by ring road. New space were made in the east side for public car park. Overall, it is evident that there was a major changes occurred by later years.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      First you did not meet word limit of 150 words which is a huge mistake because no matter how good your essay is if it is less than 150 words you will never get good score in writing. ‘In the formal layout’ former not formal. ‘there were three bus stop which was connected to ring road’ which were not was. ‘In later layout’ latter not later. ‘was small bus stand completely removed by’ bus stand was not removed instead the six bus stops were removed and a new bus station was constructed. ‘hospital that attached by ring road’ connected to the ring road. You need to work on your sentence formation as there are several grammatical mistakes in your sentences specially the wrong use of verbs and prepositions. Also watch our tutorial on how to attempt task 1 with map it will help you to improve your attempt and teach you the correct sentence structure.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  63. Eugenia says:

    Task 2:
    There is no doubt that moving abroad can be a real challenge. One of the most complicated things that people need to face is definitely speaking a foreign language. Even taking into account, that we live in the time of developed technology that makes the process of communicating much easier, I still believe that it is impossible to avoid all the practical and social problems.
    The main reason why speaking a foreign language can cause a social issue is a misunderstanding between people. Language is able to unite and separate nations. That is much in evidence in Ukraine. There have been always citizens in the west of the country who speak Russian. Since the Russian aggression, some people have switched to Ukrainian. But still, there is a number of people who ultimately preferred their mother tongue, which is Russian. And that provoked a dispute. The nation was divided. People were criticized for their language, even though they have never done anything to be guilty of.
    As we live in the technology era, practical problems can be significantly reduced. Almost every person has a smartphone and access to the Internet so that in case someone does not know the language of the country he lives in, he can look for directions in the Google Map or even order food without using a foreign language at all. If there is a need to speak to somebody, Google translate will be useful. However, technologies cannot be always relied on. What if the gadget simply breaks down?
    In conclusion, I agree that without knowing a foreign language, some practical and social problems can arise. The language question will not be less important in the future. However, technologies can ease tension in society.

  64. prajwal adhikari says:

    It is argued that there may be language barrier to people from one nation to another, which may leads to vital problem in practical and social aspects. I completely agree with the idea that contradictions may arise during miscommunication. Additionally, capacity for absorbing language should not be neglected.

    First of all, in my opinion, a lot of problems generate due to communication. In other word, there may not be proper exchange of message to one another. This is because they cannot express their views and communications fail. For example, last year there was breakdown of a political party due to miscommunications between groups of leader. Indeed, there must be clear delivery of message or expressions to minimise such problems in daily life activities.

    Similarly, i am convinced that, It is difficult to learn non mother tongue language. This is to say that learning language takes a long time and cannot be memorise quickly. this is due to our capacity of absorbing mind, younger children mind can intake language more easier than adults. For instance, my friend Shyam Pokhrel was studying english subject from his pre school and now he has fluency in talking in English. Clearly, with increasing ages, people will have low language absorbing power and seems to be lagging in communication in social as well as in daily activities.

    To conclude, language has been always barrier for people who donot feel confident to deliver speech and always been neglected from social day to day talk.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘problems generate due to communication’ problems are generated due to lack of communication of miscommunication. ‘exchange of message to one another’ exchange of messages between people. You need to learn the proper usage of small phrases. ‘cannot be memorise’ cannot be memorised quickly. Your conclusion is also short and abrupt please watch our tutorial on how to attempt this type of task it will help you to improve your attempt.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7Fk7yDpn4M

  65. Giuseppe Masi says:

    The two maps show how road access to the city hospital has been improved from 2007 to 2010.
    The project involved some big changes, such as: construction of roundabouts, bulding up a bus station and the creation of a new car parking.
    In the 2007, the hospital road network was really poor, if we compare it with 2010 facilities.
    Only few bus stops were located along hospital road and directly connected with the city road by a four way intersection.
    Istead, in the 2010 we could find an indipendent bus station well connected to the main road by a couple of roundabouts.
    In addition, should be mentioned that in 2007, only one car parking has been shared between hospital staff and public. While 2010, more infrastructure were added as a new car parking for public’s use in order to reseve the original one, biside hospital road fot the staff.
    Few small mofidications have been done on ring road, which was the most functional part of the hospital city since 2007.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘hospital has been improved’ had been improved since data is from past. ‘such as: construction’ : should not come after as. ‘road network was really poor’ you cannot say it was poor, never give your own meaning to task 1 just simply explain what is in front of you. ‘Istead, indipendent’ spellings are wrong. ‘only one car parking has been shared’ only one car park was shared.

  66. Lovey says:

    Sir i posted writing task 2 todays morning on your website but it is not show on it

  67. AKSH says:

    The map compares the approach road of a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. A glance on the map reveals that public car parking and a bus station was built to improve the transportation system.
    As shown in the map, the access road to the city hospital was primitive in 2007. The parking space was cluttered with both staff and public vehicles , bus bay was in the main road itself and used conventional road crossing caused huge traffic blocks. In 2010 they built separate parking spaces for the public in the east of the hospital with an approach road reduced the parking congestions. The bus station constructed in the south-west corner of city hospital was a relief for traffic block in the main road compared to the situation of 2007, where all the buses parked at the bus stop on both sides of the road. Roundabouts were introduced in the road where the hospital road meets ring road and city road, this was a major solution for the traffic block.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘was primitive in 2007′ do not give meaning or your interpretation to the data or graph in task 1 simply explain what is shown. ’caused huge traffic blocks’ same mistake of giving your interpretation in task 1. Your English is good and you can score good bands in writing but you have made basic mistakes which must be avoided to score high bands. Please watch our tutorial on task 1, it will teach you about mistakes to avoid in order to get good score. The link to the tutorial is given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIBUOHdFKII

  68. Lovey says:

    Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy same products in the worls .Do you thing it is a poditive or negatuvr developmet ?

    In the current scenario, the lifestyle of people has become more and more similar because thesedays individual buy the same ptoducts .According to me,it is a positive development because it has many benefits .

    To commence with, the availability of same products dipicts the harmony among countries.Additionally it is exteremly beneficial for companies as well as salesman. for example, companies get more profite and gain popularity in other countries due to the more sales of their products .Along with that, it also increase conpetition in the market and inhace the quality of produts

    Furthermore,by this unemployment rate will reduce because it provide more job opportunities . In addition, customers get better quality products from anyehere brcause many companies export new products in the market and they gives huge discount on their products to the customers .

    Inspite of its positives it has also negative points firstly,it can cause of unemployment because local shopkeepers and vendors can get huge loss in their business. Moreover, it also remove the uniquness of products .

    To conclude, it is good thing that countries are becoming similar because it inhances the business as well as imployment rate.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Sorry we cannot evaluate this. We only evaluate the tasks given on our website so that other students can learn from the feedback as well. You cannot post your own questions and answers.

  69. pinksushi says:

    Comments are not being posted. Sir, I have posted an essay yesterday but it’s not being shown on this website?

  70. pinksushi says:

    To live in a foreign land where a person has to communicate through a second language can cause critical issue for him both socially and practically. I completely agree with this statement and think that living in some place having a different dialect could be problematic.
    Firstly, it is very frustrating for a person to get a job in a different language speaking country. The employers donot want someone who cannot understand and communicate with their customers easily; therefore, this can create a problem for job seekers from foreign background. For instance, a study by American Language Association revealed that job opportunities for a foreigner in Europe is less than 35% due to language barrier. Moreover, it is also tough for a person with a different accent to run his routine errands like shopping in a local market, ordering a meal or renting a place, as he cannot effectively communicate with the local ones.
    Secondly, most people feel alone in abroad due to lack of communication with their colleagues and friends. It’s very hard for them to enjoy themselves fully in their gatherings and parties because they cannot understand their in-jokes and tricks. Thus. they feel as an outsider which can lead later to depression. In other words, this social loneliness can be detrimental for many young people as in worse conditions can force them towards suicide attempts.
    In conclusion, I strongly believe that it is very challenging for a person to live in a foreign dialect country in terms of seeking a practical job and socially communicating with friends.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      You need to make a better introduction it is simply rephrasing of the statement which is very common among the students hence majority of them do not get more than 6.5 bands. donot is not one word these are two separate words. ‘feel alone in abroad’ in should not come here. never use contractions like it’s. in-jokes is informal way of writing. Your conclusion is too abrupt and common. Your basic English is good but you need to improve your writing style. Please watch our writing tutorial on the same task and learn how to attempt it especially how to frame introduction and conclusion. the links to the tutorials are given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7Fk7yDpn4M

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0Tw4u_Rzyg

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gjwhKq-hW9w

  71. pinksushi says:

    Thank you so much for these suggestions. I will try to write better next time. Kindly tell me if the use of semi-colon in my essay is in correct order and way and how much this could increase my band score. In the end, I must congratulate you on this wonderful website. I will definitely recommend it to my friends. Bless you.

  72. joy says:

    These maps illustrate the road accessibility to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010.

    Road access to a hospital should be always smooth and traffic free. When direct access form city road is possible, then roundabouts are necessary to avoid traffic conjunction, which was the major development done in the year 2010.

    In the year 2007, the front entrance to the hospital was parallelly used as bus stops on both sides of the road. The car parking facilities were on the eastern side of the hospital road and it was accessible from the ring road.

    Several developments were made in the year 2010. Two roundabouts were constructed, one in front of the hospital and other in the city road junction. The new bus stand of larger capacity was built on the western side of the hospital road and it was made accessible from the two roundabouts. Parking facility was separated into two, one for staff only and the new one for the public was constucted on the eastern side of the ring road.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘Road access to a hospital should be always smooth and traffic free’ there is no need to give your opinion in task 1 just focus on explaining what you see in the map. Never give your own meaning or interpretation to graph or numbers in task 1. Hence your second paragraph is irrelevant as it does not contain information about the maps. ‘the front entrance to the hospital was parallelly used as bus stops’ parallelly spelling mistake and you cannot write that it was used as bus stops because the road can never be used as bus stops rather bus stops are situated on the sidelines of the roads.

  73. Muhammad Arslan says:

    The two figures show the additions and modifications of city hospital road access to city road and parking space accommodation in 2010 as compared to 2007.
    Observing the car parking space accommodation reveals that in year 2007, only one parking lot is specified for both public and staff parking whereas in year 2010 a new parking lot is added on the east side of the city hospital ring road reserved for public car parking and the old car parking space is reserved only for city hospital staff.
    In year 2007 bus stops are marked on both sides of hospital road, whereas in 2010 a separate bus station is added in the free space on west side of hospital road. The bus station is connected to city hospital ring road and city road via two separate roundabouts for convenience. The two roundabouts are structured at the both ends on hospital road providing different paths for transport vehicles to access city road, hospital road and bus station via the south end roundabout and hospital road, ring road and bus station via the north end roundabout.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘only one parking lot is specified’ was present, not specified. You have used present tense ‘is’ in this task which is a huge mistake because the maps are of past 2007 and 2010. You also need to bring some variety into your sentence formation. Please watch our tutorial on how to attempt maps in task 1 it will help you immensely to improve your attempt. The link to the tutorial is given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  74. Lala Jean says:

    The two maps illustrate how City Hospital was accessed in 2007 and 2010.
    City Hospital had undergone significant changes from the year of 2007 to 2010.
    Firstly, there was only one car park located between the hospital and City Road which accommodated both staff and public in 2007. An additional car park was constructed in 2010 on the east side of the hospital which was designated for the public whilst the existing car park was for the staff members.
    Secondly, two new roundabouts were built on Hospital Road with one intersecting City Road and the other at the intersection with Ring Road.
    Lastly, a new bus station was created on the west side of Hospital Road in 2010 as compared to six bus stops in 2007.
    I forecast that these changes, such as an additional parking lot and combined transportation depot, could resolve issues of traffic congestion around the hospital area.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Do not write city hospital and city road with capital letters. ‘I forecast that these changes, such as an additional parking lot and combined transportation depot, could resolve issues of traffic congestion around the hospital area.’ never give your own meaning or interpretation in task 1 it is a common and huge mistake which many students make. Just explain what is shown in the image which you have done in pretty good manner.

  75. Idoya Henu says:

    A language barrier can prove to be a detrimental issue when a person is staying abroad. It can cause hindrance in the day to day life with the community and can also impose practical concern to an individual. However, with the advent of technology these days, such problems can be bypassed and life has become easier despite being unfamiliar with the local language. In this essay, I will discuss my disagreement with the statement.

    Nowadays, English is being spoken unanimously in the majority of the countries. This sets the trend for making communication easier than ever before. For example, English is taught in most of the schools and is familiar to a varied number of adults as well. This makes the outsiders find comfort with the locals in another nation with access to a common language. Hence, having a common language known to speak can eradicate any miscommunication in society.

    In addition to that, the technology has made available the applications that can be used to translate to the native speaker for the purpose of communication. For example, Google translate which can convert a sentence from one language to another. It can be widely used to solve any disparity between languages and can be used by the relocated people in their daily usage.

    To conclude, it can be reiterated that not knowing a foreign language no more is a big concern today. Most of the concerns related to the language barrier has been addressed with the advancement in the technology in use.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘knowing a foreign language no more is a big’ is no more a big concern. ‘Most of the concerns related to the language barrier has been’ have been not has been. It is a very good attempt with good writing skills but there are minor grammatical mistakes and you should have given examples of problems which are supposed to be faced due to language barrier but can be tackled easily. Please watch our tutorial it will make it more clear for you.

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=l0Tw4u_Rzyg

  76. Jigna Wala says:

    We are going to discuss on City hospital facility management in 2010 comparing with 2007.
    Hospital have created two roundabouts for better and easy movement for entry and exits of all kind of transportation. Also, public parking which was earlier along with staff parking is now separated which makes appropriate segmentation also made good use of unutilized area. The bus station which was in north east is moved to south west which make easy and immediate access for bus travelers.
    Current arrangement makes one-way movement to two-way movement for entry and exit of vehicles. Staff parking include hospital van is kept at its original place which is most required for immediate entry for attending the patient.
    Roundabout is the most suitable way for appropriate management of vehicle movement is any facility. To conclude current arrangement is best suitable for the hospitality as compare to 2007.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      I assume that you have never taken any formal coaching of IELTS from any institute because in your attempt there are lot of mistakes. Your introduction is absolutely incorrect and sentence structure needs a lot of improvement. The way you have begin your task is a huge negative and you will lose at least 1-2 bands right away. Also there are a lot of minor grammatical mistakes. Please watch our tutorials on task 1 and learn how to attempt task 1, how to frame the introduction and body paragraphs. The link to the tutorials are given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIBUOHdFKII

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

      • Bhavya says:

        In 2207, the hospital had a common parking for both, the staff and the public. Later, in 2010 , an additional public car park was constructed in the eastern side of the hospital, connecting it to the ring road which could help in avoiding any traffic problems during peak hours.
        The bus stop, which was initially on the eastern side of hospital in 2007, was moved to the western side in 2010. The bus stop was connected to the two round abouts on both sides which mainly helped to directly divert the buses on the ring road so that any interruption in the movement of small vehicles is avoided.

  77. PASULA JITENDRA . says:

    The given two route maps illustrates the way to city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010 and the changes that are made in the way to the hospital in the timeperiod between 2007 and 2010
    While entering to hospital from the city road in the year 2007 by taking right from the city road we can directly enter into the hospital road wherebusstops on both sides and car park for both staff and public are located on the right side of the hospital road beside busstops
    After 3 years a lot of changes occurred in the road way to the city hospital tworound abouts are placed in the way while one is at while entering from city road to hospital road and another is at theRing road while entering into the hospital on the left of the hospital road a bustand was constructed Connecting the two round abouts and car park for both staff and public is converted to only staff parking and public parking was constructed on the right side of ring road as we can directly enter into the hospital from the parking lots.
    Overall in the year 2010 two round abouts are constructed in the way and the many bustops are convererted to single stop two entrances are made for entering into the ring road.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      You have written the entire task in present tense which is a huge mistake since the charts are of the past from 2007 and 2010. This single mistake will cost you dearly in your final score in writing.

  78. Nish Weerasinghe says:

    The maps illustrate how a city hospital was accessed in 2007 and 2010. Overall, the road infrastructure had been developed and expanded considerably throughout the given period.
    In 2007, there was one main access to the hospital via city road and hospital road. However, several bus stops had been established along the hospital road and there was only one car park which shared by both staff and public. Around the hospital the ring road was seen and this provided access to the car park.
    By 2010, the existed road network had been renovated by adding two roundabouts in main junctions. Small bust stops had been demolished and a new large bus station had been constructed on the left hand side of the hospital road with direct access to the main junctions, in order to facilitate better public transportation facility. Moreover the existed car park was reserved only for the staff and on the right had side of the hospital, a new public car park had been established, which can be accessed using the ring road.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘car park which shared’ which was shared. ‘Moreover the existed car park’ existing not existed. Please watch our tutorial on how to attempt maps and diagrams in task 1 it will help you immensely the link to the tutorial is given below:

      Moreover the existed car park

  79. Munmun says:

    The both maps presents route entry to a city hospital in the year of 2007 and 2010.
    Overall, from 2007 to 2010 there were many changes and new constructions of the facilities near the city hospital.
    In 2007, the city hospital’s south-east part had a car parking area for both public and staffs. In this car parking site, the bus stops were also presented and the bus stops were on both side of the hospital road. The ring road was on the north side of the hospital and surrounding it. he ring road was connected through hospital road to city road and to the car park too.
    In 2010, as usual, the city hospital was enclosed by ring road but there were different places for car parking. The city hospital’s north-east side has an individual car parking location for the public. Similarly, the previous car parking was certain only for staff. On the opposite of the staff’s car parking area, the bus station was placed. There were two roundabouts by which people from the city hospital went to every exact place like hospital rd, bus station, staff car park, city road. Bus station to city road, it was added by the roundabout.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘public and staffs’ staff not staffs. ‘the bus stops were also presented’ not presented but present. ‘The ring road was on the north side of the hospital and surrounding it’ since it is surrounding the hospital therefore you cannot write that it is present on north only. Please watch our tutorial on how to attempt maps in task 1 it will help you immensely. The link to the tutorial is given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nfv9IISl3QY

  80. Rifat says:

    In this era of globalization, language barrier is not a critical concern at all because of English nevertheless; there are some countries in where immigrants have to face difficulties with native tongue. As communication gap occurs, immigrants ultimately cannot maintain sociological and empirical situations. I strongly support of this belief, because without communication it would be quite impossible to live in a foreign country. This essay will give the explanation of this trouble with pertinent examples.
    On the one hand, it is understandable to all that, communication plays a crucial role to contact with others, whereas, people who live in a foreign country have to suffer a lot due to this. Because, language is the only medium to share feelings with another person but, this problem is largely neglected by those countries who offer native speech as a main communication tool more or less. For example, the Asian people will have to suffer a lot if they go to live in Germany, Italy, or Russia where native tongues are usually given more priority than English.
    On the other hand, people being socially disconnected will experience tremendous problems in every aspects of life. They not only experience loneliness but also fell into different practical and real life troubles which make them completely vulnerable in another country. Even if any emergency circumstances will arise, they cannot get any types of facility due to lack of communication. In the long run, they have to come back to their own country without accomplishing their future goals with huge despair.
    In conclusion, it is comprehensible that language obstacles are a serious concern for the people who live outside the country where native tongue is a must. So people should choose their destination more carefully in order to avoid those circumstances.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      You need to write a more relevant introduction because there is no mention of social and practical words which are the main topic of statement. ‘that, communication’ never use comma after that. ‘contact with others’ with should not come here. The structure of your essay needs to better you should discuss social problems and practical problems in separate paragraphs. Please watch our tutorial on this task it will help you to understand the mistakes that you have made and improve your attempt next time. The link to the tutorial is given below:

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7Fk7yDpn4M

  81. Christian says:

    The two plans below illustrate road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Overall, there has been a lot of developments within that 3-year period.
    The plan in 2007 shows that the access to the city hospital is through Ring Road which goes all around it. A parking area is available for both public and hospital employees on the south-east area of the hospital building and is also accessible through Ring Road. Perpendicular to the south side of Ring Road and the north side of City Road is Hospital Rd which has 3 bus stops on each side.
    In 2010, the previous public and staff parking was converted to a staff parking and the public parking area was moved to the east side of the city hospital across Ring Road. Roundabouts where built on both road intersections to Hospital Rd. The previous bus stops in 2007 where removed but a bus station was provided at the west side of Hospital Rd.

  82. vandana Sharma says:

    Writing task 2

    Residing in a country where one has to speak different language can impact one’s social as well as practical life. Socialization help people to feel relaxed and motivated. Immigration is not an easy task as one have to stay away from his culture and mother dialect. We will discuss this further in course of this essay
    Firstly, when people are living in different country with unknown people and language they sometime feel lonely as they cannot speak their native language, thus, cannot socialize themselves which can indirectly effect their health as well .For example recently there was a survey conducted by USA in 2019.According to data shown by this survey ,people from different countries have only 2 3 friends in total
    Secondly, People also face problems in day to day life like shopping, travelling which impact their life a lot. Sometimes people not able to make other person understand his point which lead to misinterpretation of his words and can lead to a major problem. Even children also face same problem in schools during studies .Communication barrier make them feel different from others which sometimes impact children mental state.
    To conclude, Although immigration helps person to understand different culture and diversity but it also impact social as well as practical life of an individual especially when he is living alone.

  83. BROWIN THOMAS says:

    The two maps below depicts road access to the city hospital in 2007 and 2010. It illustrates the changes in transport infrastructure for the above mentioned periods.
    In 2007 there is only one road to reach the city hospital which makes it quite congested as bus stops are also on the same path. There is also no bus station in 2007 which further degrades the traffic conditions. Parking was also pretty simple with a common ground for both public and staff vehicles.
    In 2010 bus stops from the main road are removed which reduced the tension on it. A bus station in south west region is constructed which channels all the bus services through an alternate route in west region to reach the city hospital. Parking also saw an improvement over the previous system with a separate parking area constructed in north east region for public vehicles. The old parking lot is now reserved for staff parking.

  84. PASULA JITENDRA . says:

    Since globalization has increased people are relocating to foreign countries where we need to speak their language rather than our mother tongue and it causes several practical and social problems
    I partly agree with this statement because there are two kinds of people who are happily living in foreign countries as they adapted to new lifestyle and can be easily communicate with the local people in the foreign language and they are not facing any misunderstandings due to miscommunication .countries such as Canada are providing a lot of opportunities for the non Canadian citizens who are going to settle in Canada as they promoting their country population wise Considering united states as an example there are more people who came from other countries and settled in America because many of us does not face any issues regarding the language
    Other kind of people who are not able to communicate in foreign language and facing several social issues wih the local people as they cannot communicate with them easily.they may get depressed if they cant be able to adapt new environment and moreover we cannot socialize with people easily according to the recent survey in Germany there are only 2-3% of people who came from other nations settled In Germany as german language is very hard and the nation is not encouraging people who are trying to relocate into Germany
    Overall,it all depends on the individual and the nation where we are going, whether we live our lives happily or we face several social problems .we should make sure that before we going there whether we can be easily communicate and adapted to new cultures

  85. Michelle Perez says:

    Task 1:
    The maps illustrate the changes in the way transportation and road was developed to gain access to a hospital in the city between 2007 and 2010.
    Overall, we can see major changes implemented within the vicinity of the medical institution by improving roads and building infrastructures.
    First, additional carpark was built to segregate hospital employees and visitors. In 2007, there is a lone carpark outside the hospital which can be reached when you travel northwards at Hospital Road, left side, after crossing City Road. By 2010, there is an additional carpark by the eastern side of the hospital just around the bend of Ring Road which caters the visitors while the old carpark was retained for the use of the staffs.
    Second, Bus station was also improved and expanded. Previously, it was at both sides of Hospital Road. After three years, it was relocated by just a few meters away, just on the left side of Hospital Road on the south-west corner of the medical building.
    Furthermore, to better manage the traffic flow, roundabouts were also supplemented. Unlike in 2007, where access to the hospital was by directly crossing City Road and traversing Hospital Road northwards until reaching Ring Road. However, by 2010, two roundabouts are found on each end of Hospital Road joining City Road on the south and Ring Road on the north end.
    Task 2:
    There are many people who see that great opportunities await them when they decide to migrate to another country. However, language barrier can sometimes lead to negative implications that affect the social and practical aspects.
    When the call of great opportunity beckons an individual, it is very hard to resist the urge to take the risk and plunge into the great unknown even if there is a need to learn a new language. Communication is vital in the process of blending in and if a person cannot express himself, it is very difficult to achieve acceptance. In most countries, depression and suicide in teens are high. Sometimes the oppressed are teens belonging to the minority population because of bullying. The sad part is, this problem was not detected at an earlier stage because they cannot express themselves fully.
    Moreover, even a simple activity can be very daunting for an individual when information cannot be obtained as well as easily given because of poor understanding. This may also lead to less opportunity in finding work as poor comprehension can lead to underperformance and thus, less productivity and growth.
    I still remember the time when I was given a chance to work in Indonesia back in 2009 with my husband. There were many instances where we get lost and cannot find our way back to our apartment as most local taxi drivers cannot speak English. In addition to that, during the time my husband got sick, it took longer time for his allergy to be treated because it is very difficult to tell the doctors his symptoms as even doctors in that country has limited English capability.
    I firmly believe that an individual should be equipped with the special skill to learn a new language to avoid experiencing unnecessary stress for the great amount of effort to understand simple instructions in foreign language as well as feeling left out because of not being able to blend in due to limited knowledge of the language of the country that is not their own.

  86. ilets_beginner says:

    The image illustrates the changes in the city hospital road map from 2007 to 2010.
    In 2007,there were bus stops on both sides of the hospital road in south of hospital but later in 2010, a bus station is built in north side of the road and a bus stop on the other side are merged into car parking for hospital employees. The parking which was for the both staff and the public is now in 2010, only for the hospital staff as well as a new parking area for the public is situated in the east of the hospital.
    Moreover, Two new roundabouts are built in 2010, One at the intersection point of the city road and hospital road and another on the hospital road in front of it for handling the traffic.
    Road plan of 2010 is more modern than 2007 and planned according to handle the city traffic in around hospital area.

  87. hazzan says:

    In 2007, the bus stop was located due west of the city hospital which must have been quite far from the city hospital. There’s only an entrance to the city hospital and there was only a land space allocated for both public and staff to use as vehicle parking lot. Furthermore, buses had to travel through the city road to reach the city hospital.
    In 2010, the road network leading to the city hospital was renovated and it looked more orderly, there were two separate parking lots, each at different locations. The city hospital now has the bus stop located very near to the it. I guess the reconstruction must have been so advantageous to the civilians residing there. In conclusion, the 2 maps show the renovation of the road network leading to a city hospital from 2007 to 2010. Exposing some differences between them

  88. Elena says:

    The two illustrations show the surrounding of a city hospital before and after building works that have taken place between 2007 and 2010.
    Overall, the most significant changes regarded the enhancement of car parks and the adding of a bus station and two roundabouts.
    First of all, disposition for buses has been changed. In 2007, six bus stops were present along Hospital Road, but they had been removed and substituted with a Bus station, located on the west side of Hospital Road. At the beginning of the period, a car park on the east side of Hospital Road was available both for staff and public. Over the three years, that parking has become a facility dedicated exclusively to staff members. For visitors, a new car park was built on the east side of the same hospital and it is accessible thanks to a specific entrance from Ring Road.
    Secondly, a roundabout has been built at the crossroad between City Road and Hospital Road, while the second at the other end of Hospital Road. Both are connected to the bus station.
    In conclusion, over the period from 2007 and 2010 road conditions have been improved in light of the fact that a bus stations, two car parks and two roundabouts were constructed in the surroundings of the city hospital.

  89. Zeinab says:

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  90. Thisaru Sachintha says:

    According to the differences in the maps, we can see a big change over three years of the plans. They added roundabouts to improve traffic. So due to less traffic around the hospital, it can deploy emergency services like ambulance quickly and people can move around the hospital area without disturbing the hospital environment. Also, they made two parking areas instead of one parking area reserved for all to increase parking space. one for the public and one for the staff. One of the major change that is taken to the changing hospital area is adding a bus stop closer to the hospital for the old bus stop the was far away from the hospital. Making easy for the public.

  91. Venkatesh says:

    The two maps illustrates the changes in road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Overall, the road access to the city hospital has developed and made ease to access in 2010 than in 2007.
    In 2007, the city hospital car park looks over populated and congested as the hospital staff and publlic had a common parking space which resolved later in 2010 by allotting a seperate car park for public at eastern sid of the hospital whereas the old parking lot is restricted for staff parking. Busstop is located far away from the hospital on its eastern part. By 2010 the bus station was expanded and relocated opposite to the staff car park. The junction of the city road and hospital road was much narrow, crowded and had higher chance of accidents to occur which developed the need for roundabout connecting cityroad, hospital road and the bus station. And at the northern end of the hospital road another roundabout is constructed to connect city hospital with the bus station and hospital road.

  92. suhail says:

    hello sir i will be glad if u check it and tell me which score i will achieve from this thanks
    the two maps provide information about how to access to a town hospital in the years 2007 and 2010.
    overall,it is clear clear that access road to a town hospital has experienced variation changes and new infrastructures were built.

    in 2007,there was only a car spot for staff and individual while , in 2010 it changed to employed parking place and a new car parking made for public on east side of the town hospital.
    in the beganing of the period bus stop were located on both side of hospital road compare to 2010, two roundabout built between ring road and city road and a new bus station constructed on south west of city hospital.

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