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IELTS Writing Test 95

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Task 1: The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: In many countries, the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why is this happening? What will be the effects of it on the family and society?

Write at least 250 words.

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4 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 95”

  1. Garima says:

    The two diagrams elucidates the model of a wave energy machine and the options for itd location. The first figure shows how wave-energy is produced by undergoing five different channels of wave energy machine. Generally, wave energy machine is put on a sea where water level goes upto the half of the bottom chamber by the help of wave. Air flows from the two direction where one from the top, upward to downward direction and other from the water level located at the lower chamber and then escapes out. Whereas, airflow from up goes to the downward to the turbine upto the water level. Turbine is continously run by electricity generator.

    The second fugure show, however, the output of wave energy machines are according to the locations where it is put. If the machine is kept on the large waves then there is high output of wave energy and also the charge of installation is high. Whereas, if the wave energy machine is put on the small waves then there will be low output with low installation cost.

    Overall, process of emulation of wave-energy and the site of wave energy machine to be installed with its cost and output has been clearly figure out in the given diagrams.

    • IELTS-PTE says:

      Diagrams elucidates is wrong it would be elucidate because diagrams are plural hence no s with verb. wrong word ‘itd’ Wrong use of word undergoing here. Two directions not direction. Also sentence formation of this line is not correct. The second figure shows not show. However not required in this line. ‘put on small waves’ wrong put on location of small waves. Wrong use of word emulation. Please understand the meaning of words before using those.

  2. Hind says:

    Many doctors say that people in today’s world do not do enough physical exercise.

    What do you think are the causes of this?

    What solutions are there to this problem?
    Health is a valuable issue, which should be well protected and preserved by all humans. Regular exercise rate was declined for many people around the world as stated by doctors. This essay will discuss some possible reasons for this problem, with the provision of some suitable solutions to tackle this hustle.

    Nowadays, there are many factors that contribute to the lack of exercising. Firstly, people pursue their career development, which requires them working for long hours, consequently, have less time to exercise. For example, most people work from 8 to 12 hours daily, which may result in less free time to practise any activities. Secondly, in many developing countries there are no well-prepared sport clubs, and structured tracks for walking, such in Sudan. Finally, the advents of the internet made the majority of people favours enjoying their free time surfing the internet.

    In order to maintain the privilege of health through exercise, there are two possible solutions. Firstly, the implementation of a fixed time for physical activities, in all work fields and schools, thus motivating adults and children to be active. Secondly, the introduction of awareness campaigns by governments and through advertisements in televisions, billboards, flyers, and procures.

    In conclusion, to help our bodies staying fit and healthy, we should exercise in a convenient way for us. These days, many doctors pointed to the decrease in exercising people, which is attributed to time tightness, lacking for sporting places, and the obsession of using the internet. Those causes can be relatively solved, by allocating time for physical activities and increase the awareness of being active and fit.

    Can you assess it for me please with the provision of possible band score?
    Many thanks for your efforts.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Regular exercise rate was declined, it should be has been declining. Do not use word hustle for problem. Such in Sudan, it should such as in Sudan. Lacking for phrase is wrong always write lack of. This is 6 bands essay. Again very simple English work on your vocabulary.

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