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IELTS Writing Test 92

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Task 1: The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city centre from 2003-2012.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: People who go to live in other countries, should follow the customs and traditions of the new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words.

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6 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 92”

  1. Haruun says:

    The given line graph highlights the number of changes in three categories of crime in the inner city of Newport for a period of ten years.

    Overall, it can be noticed that the rates of crime under burglary declined significantly, while there were fluctuations in the number of car theft recorded. However, the proportions of robbery crimes remained constant over the period.

    In 2003, majority of crime rates logged were in burglary which stood at almost 3500, whereas the rates of car theft and robbery were around 2800 and about 600 respectively. By 2008, the number of crimes decreased in all the three different types of crime with the proportions of burglary crime reducing drastically.

    In 2012, rates of crime involving car theft were the highest being approximately 2700, burglary crimes were about 1400 which were less than half as compare to the rate at the beginning of the period, while the ratio of robbery remained unchanged.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘robbery crimes remained constant’ it was not constant it ebbed and flowed. ‘rates of car theft and robbery were around 2800 and about 600’ these are not rates these are number of incidents, both are very different. same mistake repeated in other sentences as well.

  2. Rekha Soni says:

    The line graph reveals the changing rate of crime in Newport City center within a timespan of ten years.

    Overall, the rate of robbery was less and initially the rate of car theft was higher than burglary but at the end of the period the rate of car theft surpassed the rate of burglary in a decade.

    According to the graph, fluctuations can be seen from almost 500 incidents in 2003 to 900 incidents in 2012 in robbery. Moreover, around 2800 incidents of car theft was noticed in 2003 and experienced a decrease of nearly 800 times car theft in 2006. Afterwards, the figure of car theft inclined to around 2700 times car theft in 2012.

    As per the graph, the figure of burglary stood at approximately 3400 in 2003 but then it increased and reached its zenith almost to 3700 times burglary in 2004 before declining dramatically to about 1200 in 2008. Subsequently, a difference of close to 200 was apparent in the number of car theft in 2009 and in 2012.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘almost 500 incidents in 2003 to 900 incidents in 2012’ 500 and 900 are wrongly interpreted here clearly the numbers are close to 600. ‘2800 incidents of car theft was noticed’ were not was because incidents is plural. ‘car theft inclined to around 2700 times car theft’ no need to write car theft twice in the same sentence.

  3. Rekha Soni says:

    It is a fact that when people migrate to another country they get aware of new custom and tradition. Since it is certainly arduous to except new civilization,
    I believe that both cultures should be followed by individuals and these views will be discussed in the following section.

    To commence with, native people feel happy when their own custom and tradition are embraced by other people. Therefore, citizens of the host country give lots of respect and immigrant gets good career opportunity. Also, it develops a sence of uniformity and people become a part of the country. Secondly, it builds strong relationship. As people who visit overseas celebrate all festivals of the new country with native people and they can make friends and neighbors. Consequently, people do not feel loneliness and homesick.To illustrate, all women wear black long suits in Arab country and females of another countries have to wear the same suits according to the culture of Arabian whenever they visit this place.

    On the other hand, people should remember their own country’s tradition and custom.If they except other civilization, they will not be able to pass it to the next generation and these will die. Also, they should celebrate their own country’s festivals with the people of their country like get to gather. For instance, every year all Indian people play gujarati garba for nine days on the festival of navratri with great enthusiam in the Usa.

    To commence with, while individuals should not forget their culture and custom by organizing kitty parties on special occasions of their own country, native people interact with them and feel pleasure by following their culture and custom.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘all women wear black long suits in Arab country and females of another countries have to wear the same suits according to the culture of Arabian whenever they visit this place.’ need to give better example this is a not good example because women wear long suits by force not by choice. ‘To commence with’ wrong phrase for conclusion commence means to start not to conclude. Also need to write better conclusion.

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