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IELTS Writing Test 70

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Task 1: The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called Ocean Thermal Energy Conversion (OTEC).

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: It is important for public money to be spent on promoting healthy lifestyle to prevent illness rather than spending money treating people who are ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words.

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2 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 70”

  1. Julian says:

    Nowadays, payments of public budget had been focused in the preventing of sickness from individuals rather than investing in the treatments of health. This essay completely agrees with the statement and will explain the reasons why with examples from a variety of sources.
    To begin with, prevention is used as a mechanism to resolve problems in any area of the human life, but specially in virus which have a possibility of been spread. Thus, since this mechanism is used in the medical environment from governments the results had shown a considerable decreasing in the index of sick individuals. For instance, an article sponsored by BBC NEWS showed that countries who are investing in prevention are having 70% of chances of stopping the virus completely. In my view this is an effective measure to confront health problems.
    Moreover, it is demonstrated that sharing advices for a salutary lifestyle resolve the problem of sickness better than treating individuals when they have already the virus. Furthermore, most of the governments with less rates of illness have been using this measure since the beginning of this century. To illustrate, a study published by WHO (World Health Organization) revealed that governments who invest in marketing for promoting better lifestyles are having 80% less viruses in their countries and scientists affirm that in the future it will be the end of 60% all illness in the world although some countries decide not preventing the virus.
    To sum up, as can be showed before, spending money in the prevention of health problems from individuals is the correct measure for combating those problems and treating the people who are sick is not the solution for the problem. Therefore, this essay completely agrees with the statement.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Your introduction is still not proper. You are starting straight with the statement, please watch the video on task 2 carefully and then try to make a better introduction. ‘But specially in virus which have a possibility of been spread’ is grammatically wrong. ‘Salutary lifestyle’ is not a proper phrase. Instead of using viruses talk about diseases. ‘as can be showed before’ is wrong phrase here. Last line is unnecessary.

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