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IELTS Writing Test 48

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Task 1: The chart below shows the number of men and women in further education in Britain in three periods and whether they were studying fulltime or part-time.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Some people spend a lot of money on sports and cultural events. Do you think this is this good or bad?

Write at least 250 words.

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4 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 48”

  1. walskshhsh says:

    The bar chart illustrates the statistic of males and females in three periods in British education which includes two types of education: full-time education and part-time education. The periods that this chart represent are 1970,1980 and 1990.

    Overall, the full-time education of women in this three periods grew up fast as opposed to men that they were considerably less or simply we can say more fluctuated. However, Part-time education was slightly opposite because of man part-time education that they did not rise wobbly as full-time education. Moreover, women part-time education roses sharply between 1970 and 1980, but between 1980 and 1990 was more wobbling.

    In term of males full-time education in 1970 was higher than the other two periods and reached about 1000 students. Furthermore, women full-time education were the lowest students as opposed to students of 1980 and 1990, so from what is shown in the chart, it was just over 600 students. In period two which was 1980, the males full-time education were slow down until reached approximately 800 students. In contrast of women full-time education that they increased to be almost 800 students. In the end of males full-time education, they evaporated near to 1000 students again. In women full-time education, they roses fast till just over 1200 students.

    On other hand, part-time educations were not a huge difference between males and females . Also, there were not a big variety between the periods. All of them were climbed, so in general of educations, part-time education became more common and particular than full-time education to both women and men.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      The periods are 1970-71 not 1970. ‘the full-time education of women in this three periods grew up fast’ full time education did not grow rather the number of women who opted for full time education grew. You have used full time and part time education as subjects in this task which is wrong. The main subjects are men and women who choose full time or part time education. Your entire task need to be written again because this is a huge mistake which you made in the whole task so change it and submit again.

  2. harpreet says:

    These days sports and cultural events plays an instrumental role in individuals life due to this some rungs of the society spend a big chunk of money on sports and cultural events. In my opinion this is a positive development and this essay intends to delve its various benefits of this trend which supports my viewpoint.

    Plz rate my introduction

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