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IELTS Writing Test 44

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Task 1: The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Task 2:Some people believe bicycles have a lot of advantages, whereas others believe bicycles have more disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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4 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 44”

  1. Rinal Kansara says:

    Sir did u get my task2.i had submitted before 2dys.

  2. Zp says:

    Long gone was the days when only source of transportation was bicycles but now in this contemporary world there are numerous type of transportation and in regard of bicycle debatable question arises whether this mode of transportation has more benefits or disadvantages however in this essay both views are deliberated before arriving at a rational conclusion

    the advantages of using bicycle are manifold. firstly , using bicycle for travelling helps an individual to remain healthy as it involves overall movement of body specially improved biceps of quadriceps muscles.additional study depicts that children who use bicycle for travelling are more active than the children who travels by using other mode of transport like cars and so on. apart from this it is eco friendly mode of transport and it does not reduce pollution therefore it has advantages in terms of health in environment
    on the other hand according to Sir Isaac Newton “every action has an equal and opposite reaction” similarly disadvantage of using bicycle cannot be overlooked. first of all bicycle are not convenient for long distances as the speed of bicycle is very slow as compared to other mode of transport
    secondly in a bicycle only one person can travel at one time and in case of other transport minimum of four person can travel. last but not least bicycle are not worthfull in case of emergency situation since it involves physical movement of a body and in case of some injury person cannot able to operate bicycles
    after analysing both the views I believe that advantages of using bicycle has an edge over the disadvantages.

    Sir please evaluate my mistake. And I have my exam on 7 sep pls give me tips pls it’s request sir

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘Long gone was the days’ right way to write is gone are the days. ‘numerous type of transportation’ types not type. ‘in regard of bicycle’ regard to not of. You need to give your opinion that which side you are on in the introduction so that the examiner knows what to expect in the rest of the essay. ‘children who travels’ travel not travels since children are plural. ‘it does not reduce pollution’ it does not create pollution not reduce pollution. you need to discuss the disadvantages in the separate paragraph not in the same paragraph as the advantages. Need to write better and elaborate conclusion it is too short and abrupt.

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