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IELTS Writing Test 42

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Task 1: The line graph below shows the changes in the share price of Outokumpu companies in euros between January 2006 and December 2010.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones, letter-writing ability is disappearing. To what extent do you agree?

Write at least 250 words.

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6 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 42”

  1. RINAL KANSARA says:

    It is irrefutable that nowdays in modern era,people have holistically changed the way to send messages to their kith and kin.Since technology is proliferating at a startling pace,several electronic gadgets are available to interact their loved one within few seconds.However in last decades it was absolutely arduous to send message instantly,now people just click a button of cellphone of laptop to contact other people.Furthermore,there are several reasons for such a situations and few visible influences too but,i would agree with the given notion.
    To commence with,technology is a backbone for individuals and due to technology writing skill certainly disappear in each field.Firstly,plenty of applications such as facebook,twitter,whatsapp are available everywhere in all over the globe.Consequently,country has become a small ll village where individuals often contact with each other regardless of distance rather than writing a letter.Also,personnel perform meetings immediately and send report through emails,students make projects on laptop or computer and save file on it which is favorable for them to read it again according to convenient time. Secondly, there is no time limit to talk with others because it is cheap than traditional letter writing method.While during a video call they visualize to each other,it is impossible in writing a message.Another point worth noting is,in all shops vendors have been making invoices on computers since the revolution of technology instead of hand written bills.
    On the contrary,still in various parts of the globe people write letters especially who live in rural area due to scarcity of internet,writing is their hobby as well as some are certainly deprive from new technology.Moreover,foreigner apply visa for fiancee by showing as an evident of hand written letters .
    To recapitulate,electronic gadgets assist to people lot to do copy pest in one second it paves the way to finish work immediately.Although it decline the ability of writing,it saves the environment when people do not use paper for writing and who live away from home do not feel homesickness.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Interact ‘with’ their love ones’. The main topic of letter writing is missing from your introduction. There is no time limit instead write time constraint. Deprived of not from. Evidence not evident. Assist people not to people. Do not feel homesick not homesickness.

  2. Rinal Kansara says:

    The line graph reveals the variations in the price of the share of Outokumpu industries in euros within a time span of five years.

    Overall,a zig-zag pattern can be seen in the share price of Outokumpu companies throughout the period of five years.

    According to the graph, the figure of the share price stood at almost 13 euros in 2006, and then it inclined and reached its zenith approximately 32 euros in 2007 before declining smoothly to nearly 28 euros after few months. Furthermore, around 21 euros share price had been observed at the end of the year 2007 but it rose by around 10 euros in 2008.

    As per the graph, the pattern of share price reached to almost 7 euros in 2009.Moreover,it varied from roughly 7 euros to 16 euros in 2009.Afterwards, in 2010, fluctuations were noticed from approximately 12 euros to 17 euros in the share price of Outokumpu organizations.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘zig-zag pattern’ instead of zig-zag use the phrase erratic pattern. ‘the pattern of share price reached to almost 7 euros’ not the pattern but the value of share price reached to almost 7 euros. Overall it is a good attempt.

  3. Nuzhat says:

    The graph demonstrates the data regarding the oscillation between the share prices of outokumpo industries in their currency from 2006 to 2010.
    Overall, it’s clearly shown, share prices shows a gradual eractic pattern of change for the period of five year.
    First of all, the prices rose upward in 2006, while in the mid of 2006 its frantically increasing and reached to its apex at the end of 2006. In 2007 its continuously shows a zig Zag pattern of increasing and decreasing while in the mid of this year its shows abrupt change of inclivity and reached to its zenith nearly the end of this year.
    From the graph, in 2008 it’s again elucidate the pattern of trifling and reached to the rate of almost near 5 percent while in next two consecutive years its reveals palpitations in the prices sometimes its inclined while in the next turn its declined at the end of 2010.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘it’s’ avoid using short forms. ‘clearly shown, share prices’ clearly shown that. ‘shows a gradual eractic pattern’ shows is present tense but data is of past, eractice spelling mistake, and you cannot use gradual with erratic because erratic is never gradual. ‘its frantically increasing and reached to its apex ‘ you have used past continuous and simple past in the same sentence try to stick to one form, generally it should be simple past. You have used a lot of present tense with verbs which is wrong since data is of past it is a huge mistake.

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