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IELTS Writing Test 36

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Task 1: The chart below shows the percentage change in the share of international students among university graduates in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2:Some people think the government should be responsible for solving the pollution problems which result from heavy traffic. To what extent do you agree?

Write at least 250 words.

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8 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 36”

  1. Rinal Kansara says:

    The bar graph reveals the percentage of international graduates in several Canadian provinces within a timespan of six years.

    Overall,while the figure of international graduate pupils of Canadian universities dominated in 2006, minimum international students completed graduation in Canadian universities in 2001.

    According to the graph,in 2001, almost 7% international pupils of new Brunswick completed graduation, but a decrease of nearly 1% was noticed in the students who belonged to Nova Scotia.Moreover,the figure of international students reduced from approximately 6% in Quebec to 4% in Manitoba.In 2001,the percentage of international pupils of Manitoba and Newfoundland and Labrador remained static roughly to 3% point and after that,a decline of around 0.5% had been observed in the percentage of Ontario pupils.

    As per the graph,in 2006,the figure of New Brunswick international students stood at close to 12% point.Then, it dived gradually close to 7% students in Alberta university.By 2006,it had experienced a leap about to 11% points.In addition,the percentage of Manitoba students and pupils of Newfoundland and Labrador was similar at 7%.Subsequently, a slight reduction of almost to 5 % was apparent in the percentage of Ontario students.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘ within a timespan of six years’ time span are two separate words. Again you have made the same mistake of using words like minimum, these words are used when comparing three or more things, for two things use lower and higher, or more and less. ‘decrease of nearly 1% ‘ decrease of 1 percentage point. ‘static roughly to 3% point’ here it would be 3% only not point. 12% point is wrong percentage point is used when depicting a trend like increase or decrease in percentage.

  2. Rinal Kansara says:

    There is no doubt that now a days,the pollution is a big concern for individuals.Since the number of vehicles have increased, people face everyday traffic problem.However there are several factors which engender pollution,i believe that this issue can be solved easily by people than the government.

    To commence with,due to the advent of the technology, the number of vehicles which people use in their day to day life have raised. Moreover, individuals utilize more private vehicles whenever they travel for long and short distance rather than public transport such as bus and train.As a result, everyday enormous amount of air pollution is generated. Secondly,the government has made some sort of strict traffic rules to alleviate traffic issue, but these are not followed properly.Thus,it is certainly onus on the people how to deal with this difficult problem.

    Another point worth noting is that, when people get stuck in traffic jam,they have hurry to reach (here at or not)their destination immediately. Consequently, they do not stop their vehicle a little bit and do not bother about air pollution.To illustrate,in Delhi,the government had started metro train which is controlled by computer and environmental friendly.In addition, workaholics people have been traveling through it since three years and it can be seen that the pollution has declined 50% as compared to the past.Hence, individuals should understand their liability as good citizens towards the environment.

    To recapitulate,if people start to use public transport rather than personal vehicles and try to change their life style,the day is not far when the issue of the pollution of all over the world will be ameliorated forever.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘Thus,it is certainly onus on the people’ correct way to write is thus the onus is certainly on the people. to reach at their destination. In second body paragraph your argument does fit with your example make it more relevant.

  3. RINAL KANSARA says:

    do u mean do not write comma after thus? i do not understand.

  4. Bonnie says:

    The given bar chart releases how many international students graduated university among in different Canadian states from 2001 to 2006.
    Overall, it is clear that the number of international students in 8 states increased in 2006.

    From 2001 to 2006, the percentage of students studying in British Columbia and Ontario almost doubled from around 4% to 11%, around 3% to 6%, respectively,
    In Manitoba and New foundling and Labrador, there was a same amount of increase in both by approximately 3 percentage points.

    At the same period of time, the percentage of New Brunswick’s students constituted about 7% and went up almost 12%, followed by, in Nova Scotia, the percentage of oversea students went up by around 4%, in Quebec and Alberta, the number of oversea students accounted for almost 6^ and 4%, and rose up to nearly 8% and 7%, respectively.

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