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IELTS Writing Test 34

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Task 1: The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Scientist have been warning for many years about the importance of protecting the environment and that we must limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warnings, many people do not do this. What are the reasons for that and how people can be encouraged to take an interest in protecting the environment?

Write at least 250 words.

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16 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 34”

  1. RINAL KANSARA says:

    The map illustrates the changes that had taken place in the village of the Stokeford since 1930.Overall, the village witnessed a great deal of changes between 1930 and 2010.Some new facilities such as a retirement home was added;however,present facilities such as shops,a primary school,gardens.a farm land were demolished.
    With regards to changes that were happened besides of the river,two shops were demolished and new houses were built next to the post office and the post office was remained unchanged.Moreover,at the bottom of the post office,the was the farmland which was ruined and opposite to the garden,some houses were added in square shape and some along the the path.
    Furthermore,on the North-East corner,the farmland,the horizontal path, three houses were destroyed and new houses were constructed in rectangular shape.A Primary school was expanded.Additionally,gardens,a tree,large house were removed from right side to the path and a retirement home is developed and front of it houses were evolved.
    Although many things were abolished,in place of it more houses were located in 2010.The infrastructure had totally changed the village of Stokford during 80years.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Use were with facilities because it is plural. You cannot say present facilities because these are from the past. Never use of with besides. Post office remained unchanged, not was remained. ‘the was the farmland’ is wrong. Retirement home was developed not is. Houses were built not located. Much better attempt as compared to your previous attempts. Keep it up!

  2. Rinal kansara says:

    Would u plz explain me what had u written about with and besides.plz.i m unable. Understood.would u explain me deeply so I will not repeat next time

  3. RINAL KANSARA says:

    It is irrefutable that protection of environment is certainly liability of individuals.Since people are utilizing fossil foils, pollution is proliferating at startling pace.People do not concern about future generation;however,government have already inform them about irreversible sources.There are several causes which engender this problem,while it can be mitigated with some innovative solutions.In the following section i will discuss both,causes and remedies to prevent it.
    Discussing the reasons,the most common one is, people have become workaholic consequently,they use various mode of transportation as well as there are plenty of vehicles are available in market.Moreover,individuals desire to reach at destination instantly and they merely stop the car in traffic jams or at signals but never switch off it until a second.Secondly,in their hectic schedule they careless about their duty and throw the garbage everywhere in spite of using dustbin.Next,some burn plastic which emits carbon monoxide and impair to ozone layer and global warming.Farmers use pesticides, insects and equipment of new technology in farming which pave the way to more crops and revenue whilst,all these increase pollution.Another factor to consider is,in India,the Prime Minister Narendra Modi had restricted plastic bags and people have been using cotton bags rather than plastic bags for shopping since two years.Eventually they get a success in this mission and in comparison of past nowdays, many regions have scant pollution.
    In order to minimize detrimental influence,government should start various campaign and put bin in different parts of country which holistically educate the individuals.Furthermore,school should embark environment education from first standard and aware to pupils.Additionally,government should initiated wind and solar energy because it cost people arm and leg.
    To recapitulate,fuels are absolutely necessary to live luxurious life,although it harmful for the environment.If people will not stop to use it,the day will not far when the earth will become a boiling point and mankind will not be able to survive on the earth.

  4. RINAL KANSARA says:

    is there any mistake in it?any grammatical?and i really appreciated u and lots of thanksssssssss to u bcz when i started to write i was unable to write this type of was tense how i will improve it but from ur help it still i have 1month for exaM AND I M trying to take 7

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      I do not see any mistakes, a couple here and there is what everybody makes it is inevitable but that will also go away with time.

  5. Haruun says:

    The two given maps illustrate various alterations which have taken place in Stokeford town since 1930 to 2010. Overall, it can be observed from the diagrams that initially there were many farmlands scattered within the village with few houses, but later on all the farmlands and shops were demolished making way to build more housing units within the village.

    In 1930, the Stokeford town was almost a farming community since most of their lands were used for farming specifically in the northeastern and southwestern parts of the village. There is a river called river stoke which passes through the outskirt of the community from the northeast to southwest, and a main road which crosses the river at the north through a bridge, the road then extends to the south passing through the center of the village. Also, around the middle of the village is a large house with gardens surrounding it and just above the gardens are a few residential apartments on both sides of the main street with a primary school, post office and shops.

    In 2010, all the farmlands were destroyed paving way for more housing units on both sides of the main street and adjoining roads, the large house was also converted to a retirement home, however the Post office, primary school, river and bridge remain unchanged.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Alterations which had taken place not have taken place. And changes happened in 2010 and not in 1930, 1930 is the original map or status of the town and in 2010 changes happened from that original structure. Making way to build more, instead write ‘for the construction of new housing units’. In the second paragraph you have describe the map in present tense which is a mistake because the map is of 1930. In the last line it should be remained unchanged not remain again 2010 is past therefore second form of verb should be used here.

  6. Haruun says:

    So the introduction should had been : The two given maps illustrate the nature of Stokeford town in 1930, and the various alterations that occurred in the village in 2010

  7. Rinal Kansara says:

    The map reveals the changes that had taken place in the village of Stokeford in the year of 1930 and 2010.Some new facilities were added, such as houses and a retirement home.

    Overall,the infrastructure of the village of Stokeford had holistically changed in 2010 as compared to 1930.More houses were constructed in 2010.

    According to the map, a farmland and a path which were located in(let me know here in or on) the North East corner in 1930,were demolished and houses were constructed in the North -East corner in 2010.Also,Primary school was expanded in the middle of the village in 2010.In 1930,there were two shops beside the post office but these were(or they sir?) destroyed and new houses were constructed at that place in 2010.Moreover,in the Sothern part of the village, the farmland, a tree, gardens, a large house and three houses were ruined and the retirement house and many houses were made and a main road was connected to the retirement house and both sides houses were built in 2010.

    As per the map, a bridge on the top of tha map,river Stroke on the left side of the main path and the post office in the middle of map were remained unchanged during both years.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘Some new facilities were added, such as houses and a retirement home’ this should be part of your overall not introduction. ‘in(let me know here in or on) ‘ in is fine. ‘these were(or they sir?)’ these because they is used with humans only. ‘three houses were ruined’ instead of ruined use the word razed. ‘a main road’ the main road because main cannot be a common noun, main means something important hence the main road. ‘a bridge on the top of tha map’ on top of the map?

  8. Rinal Kansara says:

    There is no doubt that population is increasing at startling pace across the globe.Since people have started to live luxurious life ,they utilize enormous amount of energy everyday.
    However there are several reasons which engender this issue, these can be mitigated through some innovatie solutions and in the following section both causes and remedies will be discussed.

    Discussing the reasons,the most common one is,people have become workaholics and they regularly use private transport to reach(here after reach at will come or not?) their destination for short and long distance rather than using public transport.As a result,huge amount of pollution is generated everywhere.Secondly, individuals use plastic bags in their day to day life which play vital role in damaging the environment.Moreover, when the plastic burns,it creates carbon monoxide in the atmosphere which is harmful for the environment.Hence, people themselves are great enemies of the environment.To illustrate, The Taj Mahal of Agra which is located in Uttar Pradesh and made up of white marbles, had started to change its colour from white to yellow.Consequently, vehicles are banned within 5km area as it is one of the seventh wonder of this world.

    In order to minimize negative influence,the government should start to provide solar energy.As a result, individuals will start to use it for all electric appliances at their home.Furthermore, the government should impose higher taxes on the organizations because they throw waste in lakes, sheashores and rivers.As a result before throwing they will think about the penalty.For instance,in India,every year all schools celebrate 5th June as world environment day to impart in-depth knowledge about environment to students.

    To recapitulate, although people do not bother about the future and waste more energy,they can be encouraged by many ways such as providing other resources of energy and regulating strict laws and penalties.Otherwise,the day is not far when our big planet,the earth will become a boiling pot.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      reach is fine. Plastic bags are irrelevant here because the main issue is excessive use of energy so this point is misfit in your essay. Similarly in the second paragraph you have discussed waste. You have completely digressed from the issue of energy use to waste disposal, a huge mistake.

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