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IELTS Writing Test 32

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Task 1: The graph below gives information from Annual Energy Outlook 2008 about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projection until 2030.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: The education of young people is the main priority in countries around the world. Some people believe that educating adults who cannot read or write is essential for the society and more funding should be made available for it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

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6 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 32”

  1. RINAL KANSARA says:

    The graph reveals the energy from various fuels which individuals of USA had been utilising since 1980 and it also illustrates the forecast until 2030.
    With regards to use of petrol and oil,it stood at 35 quadrillion units at first year, then it went through many fluctuations until 1995. Afterwards,through out 18 years it swelled drastically and it expected to be reach it’s zenith point, peak at around49 quadrillion units in 2030.Initially Natural Gas embarked from 20 quadrillion units which was higher than coal but at the end of the period it predicted to coal energy surpassed Natural Gas by a difference of almost 6 quadrillion units.Also,Natural Gas passed through many palpitation nearly 15 to 25 quadrillion units from 1885 to 2010.
    As per the data,people had started to consume Nuclear energy from around 1987,it soared gradually to nearly 7 quadrillion units in next 18 years.Furthermore,it remained plateau after 2005 whereas it anticipated close to 9 quadrillion units in 2030. In 1990, wind energy initiated to use at 4 quadrillion units and it varied slightly within few years,it is prediction that it would reach round about 7 quadrillion units in future.In 1980, Hydropower used approximately 4 quadrillion units,it is forecast that it would have static till 2030.
    Overall,in the USA people had been utilising maximum petrol and coal and they would use more over the period of 38years while, dwellers had been using least Hydropower within a time span of 38 years and they would use less in future.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      We are soon going to upload a video on how to write task 1 with future data. Please watch that video first and then attempt this task. You will see a lot of improvement in your attempt in this type of task.

  2. Rinal Kansara says:

    The line graph reveals energy consumption by fuel in the USA within a time span of forty years and it also illustrates the prediction of the future until 2030.

    Overall,the figure of petrol and oil dominated in past and the forecast says it is expected to soar in the future.

    According to the line graph,people started to use nuclear power approximately 4 quadrillion units in 1986,but uses of nuclear power increased nearly to 7 quadrillion units in 2018.Furthermore,it is anticipated to swell smoothly to 8 quadrillion units in 2030.Moreover, variations can be seen from around 3 quadrillion units in 1990 to 5 quadrillion units in 2010 in consumption of solar energy and it is predicted to raise slightly close to 6 quadrillion units in 2030.In addition,the contribution of hydropower was almost 4 quadrillion units in 1980. Afterwards,the pattern fluctuated around 3 quadrillion units in 1985 to 5 quadrillion units in 2013 and as it is expected to decline to around 4 quadrillion units in 2030.

    As per the graph,the pattern of natural gas consumption started at 20 quadrillion units which was higher than roughly 16 quadrillion units of coal consumption,but at the end of the period the pattern of coal is predicted to surpass the pattern of natural gas by a difference of around 6 quadrillion units.Additinally,oscillations had noticed from 35 quadrillion units to 31 quadrillion units for 15 years in consumption of petrol and oil.Then,the figure of petrol and oil consumption is anticipated to leap drastically and reach its zenith almost to 49 quadrillion units in 2030.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘consumption by fuel’ consumption of fuel. ‘prediction of the future’ prediction for the future. ‘to raise’ to rise. ‘the pattern of natural gas consumption started’ pattern did not start it was the units of natural gas consumed in that year. ‘pattern of coal is predicted to surpass the pattern of natural gas’ not pattern but consumption or use of coal is expected to surpass the use of natural gas.

  3. Rinal Kansara says:

    It is a fact that education has become the backbone of country’s development.Since it is useful for individuals in all spheres of life,they often desire to take best education. While some people start to take the knowledge from early age, some are deprived of education. Therefore , i believe that adults who are not able to read and write should be educated.

    To commence with,education plays vital role in individuals’ life which helps them to distinguish good or bad for them and what is right and wrong. Moreover,it is absolutely essential for the holistic development of people, they become responsible citizens and learn some sort of skills such as good communication skills and leadership skills.Secondly,it provides better job opportunities and enhances living standard as all job require personnel with good qualification.In addition, illiteracy and poverty will be removed forever from the country.If people become educated,they will impart the best knowledge to offspring and make their future bright.

    Another point to consider is,some people are unable to take education due to scarcity of money.Hence,aid should be provided them.To illustrate,the literacy rate of Pakistan is 40% because of rural areas have poor education system and people are unable to study at right age.As a result,the government had emphasized on improving education system and started the training center Darul Sukoon for illiterate people which is funded by some organizations charity trusts.Also,it has declined 60% illiteracy rate of Pakistan.

    To recapitulate,although people do not take education at right age for several reasons,they should be encouraged to read and write by giving financial assist.So,they can develop the country and earn good money.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘aid should be provided them’ provided to them. ‘because of rural areas have poor education system’ of should not come here. ‘it has declined 60% illiteracy rate of Pakistan’ what are you trying to say here with 60%. Overall a very good attempt, with a lot of improvement. Keep it up.

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