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IELTS Writing Test 16

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Task 1: The table below shows the monthly expenditure of an average Australian family in 1991 and 2001.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.

Task 2: Individuals should improve the environment or is it the government and large companies that should take action?

Write at least 250 words.

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7 responses to “IELTS Writing Test 16”

  1. The table presents the information on per month spendings of an average Australian family in six different categories in 1991 and 2001. Overall, the people of Australia spent more dollars on other goods and services in both years, whereas consumption was least on clothes in both the given years. The total outlay of the Aussies families was highest in 1991.

    The given data shows that the people of Australia spend exactly $155 and $95 on food and housing in 1991, and experienced an exactly $5 drop in 2001. On the other hand, the category of other goods and services showed $20 escalation in 2001. There was a significant rise in per month expenses of electricity and water in the year 2001, being 45 dollars greater than the previous year spendings.

    In terms of clothes, the Australians monthly consumption was thirty dollars in 1991, but it reduced by ten dollars points in two years. Conversely, an immense decline in per month expenditure of transportation was noticed from 1991 to 2001.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Always use the with words like least, highest. If by outlay you mean overall spending then it was higher in 2001 and not in 1991. Please interpret the numbers correctly. For food and housing the expenditure increased by $5 not dropped. You cannot write previous year because the previous year to 2001 is 2000 not 1991. Reduced by ten dollars not ten dollar points. Cannot write conversely here. Please watch the videos on task 1 on our official youtube channel to improve your attempt and subscribe to the channel so that you get notification when we upload new videos.

  2. Rinal Kansara says:

    The table reveals the information of spending mothly Australian dollar by Australian family in two years.

    Overall,Australian family spent minimum money per month in 1991 for all given things except clothing and trasport,while maximum dollar in 2001.

    According to the table, food and housing had similar pattern during both years.Australian spent monthly 5 dollar more for food and housing in 2001 than 1991.People were more interested in buying clothes (30dollar) every month in 1991,whereas after ten years people spent less money per month in clothing (20 dollar). Furthermore,Australian family spent 75 dollar per month for water and electricity in 1991 but after a decade it was 120 dollar.

    As per the table,Australian spent monthly 25 dollar more for trasportation system in 1991(70 dollar) that of 2001(45 dollar). Moreover, monthly expenditure of Australian family was 250 dollar in 1991and it reduced by 20 dollars in 2001.Additionally, Australian family spent every month total 675 dollar in 1991 but after ten years their monthly expenditure increased with 40 dollar.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      Not spending monthly but the average monthly spending of an Australian family. Use dollars not dollar with numbers because dollar means one dollar. Do not write numbers in bracket we have given this feedback several times before but you seem to miss it every time. Expenditure increased by 40 dollars not with 40 dollar.

  3. Rinal Kansara says:

    There is no doubt that deforestation is increasing at startling pace across the globe.Since people are cutting down trees, the day is not far when the earth will become a boiling pot.While some people advocate that it is individuals liability to save environment,others believe that it should be saved by government and industries.

    To commence with,individulas have responsibility towards environment.If people do not improve environment,it will certainly arduous for them to survive on the earth after few years. Furthermore,individuals should use more public transport rather than personal vehicles because some resources are nonrenewable and fuels engender carbon dioxide in the air which makes air pollution.Secondly, trees are a precious gift for everyone as well as they are beautiful creation of nature.Consequently,people should not cut trees for several purpose such as making furniture, building skyscrapers.To illustrate, in India,all schools have been celebrating 5th June as an environment day since 10 years and all school pupils every year plant trees to save environment.Hence, teachers impart knowledge of environment to their school students.

    On the contrary, government should emphasize on improving environment. Also,factories should be penalized by government owing to that they throw their waste in lake,river and air that produce pollution on the earth.Thus, companies have great contribution in making environment worse.For instance,Gujarat is known as an industrial area in India and all factories had been throwing poisonous gas at night but they were high penalized by health and safety department in the year of 2017.As a result,skin diseases have extinct and people get clean water as compared to past.

    To recapitulate,although government should make rules and companies should find method to dispose waste, individuals have more way to save environment such as growing trees and chnaging their lifestyle.

    • IELTS MASTER says:

      ‘individuals liability’ it should be individuals’ liability. ‘it will certainly arduous’ it will certainly be arduous. ‘several purpose’ several purposes. ‘skin diseases have extinct’ skin diseases have disappeared. Changing spelling is wrong. Overall a decent attempt.

  4. Aisha says:

    One cannot deny the fact that the ecology issue has an enormous importance in the world at the start of 21st century. There are contrasting viewpoints on whether government and large companies should solve this problem, or is it in the individuals’ hands. This essay will consider the validity of both sides and provide my opinion on this topic.
    First of all, it is necessary to clarify that with the growing urbanization rate and the increasing number of factories and manufacture plants global ecological situation will continue to deteriorate every day and if nothing changes, there will be irreversible consequences. That is why many people consider that only government can mitigate this problem. For instance, government could reduce the level of emissions by imposing restrictions on factories or by promotion and investment of green energy, like wind or solar energy. Similarly, large companies could use environmentally friendly and recyclable materials in their production.
    On the other hand, it should not be forgotten that small steps are better than none and even one person can help to improve situation. The progress should start from individual’s attempts, by changing person’s daily habits and his attitude toward environment. First of all, it should start from learning to respect and protect the nature surrounding us.
    In conclusion, taking into account the above-mentioned points, I would like to say that government should take matters on their own hands, since it is able to do this more efficient and faster; however we should not forgot about our own responsibility towards the environment.

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